Maybe [The End]

By Err0r

Maybe
If I had less pride
I could've told you
I felt like dying

And maybe
Just maybe

You could've
Stopped me.

[Maybe one person could change one life...]

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Published on Sunday, July 29, 2007. Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"

Comments on "Maybe [The End]"

On Wednesday, May 11, 2011, suicidalsecrecy (42) wrote:

W.O.W. Simply brilliant.
On Friday, October 12, 2007, MESUN (230) wrote:

last night i heard the very words from my father that i have longed to hear from anyone, and they have changed me, because of that i have more understanding for the last line than ever before.
On Wednesday, August 15, 2007, Reefer_rave (139) wrote:

This has to go on my favorites, I simply am stunned.
On Monday, August 6, 2007, Dancing_Monkey (1228) wrote:

No doubt about it
On Thursday, August 2, 2007, Mylissa (825) wrote:

love it...love it and love it some more.
On Thursday, August 2, 2007, Mistress Shadow (249) wrote:

So very true and I agree with Aunty. For me, this is one of those things you realize when your body doesn't let you take it anymore. ~T
On Sunday, July 29, 2007, veingo (526) wrote:

If only it were easyer to change one's self. Great write, girl. ^V^
A former member wrote: I believe it. Can't tell you how often what you've described has happened
On Sunday, July 29, 2007, Aunty Depressant (423) wrote:

I wonder who has never felt this close. I love how you identify pride. When I feel like I want to die I can not usually admit some kind of hurt or defeat. REALIZING not being alone can make an impact.
On Sunday, July 29, 2007, Aunty Depressant (423) wrote:

Sadly, many can feel alone surrounded by others..sometimes making it worse if around the cruel or indifferent..and many to jump in and hurt the wounded. But ONE can make a difference too.
On Wednesday, August 1, 2007, elisa (1595) wrote:

one of the best comments i've ever read.... i completely agree with Aunty..........viable knowledge, destine for wisdom.
On Sunday, July 29, 2007, Army Barbie (316) wrote:

You are more than amazing.
A former member wrote: *sighs* Yes. One person...CAN...change one life...but they have to be patient, and they have to stay strong through everything that might occur. In the end, though...the real change comes from within. Excellent piece. ~*Beth*~