Innocence Spilled Out Of Insanity
By Err0r
My angel.
My love.
My baby.
My Babe.
My sweetheart.
Hey Hun,
Hey Dreamer,
Hey still hearted lover.
Foundation and Trust. We have that. We honor that. We respect that.
To hold you in my arms tight like the pillow that reminds me of your soft
skin against me.
Dreams.
So fragile so frail.
So sincere when we own one.
Random ramblings and mutters collected together to spill the cup holding
all of my thoughts.
These are just a few..
And when we kiss.
Our lips will touch and our souls will meet.
For the first time, we'll know who we are.
We'll feel the two empty halves become a whole.
and when we part.
We'll feel smaller than just a tiny part of what we were before the embrace.
Blushing hills
Flourished emotions.
Spring is in the fall.
For everyone.
[Except me.]
For You.
My Angel.
My Hope Of Dreams.
My Reality.
The other half of my lips.
That forms the smile
That I fall asleep with at night.
Innocent sincerity.
Do you understand?
Could you feel this way for me too?
Maybe.
Just maybe.
The cup empties just for you.
Drink my thoughts.
And swirl my perception around into the crevices of your mouth.
And when you've finished raping my inner child.
...
spit me out and
tell me who I am.
Comments on "Innocence Spilled Out Of Insanity"
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A former member wrote:
So sweet... and then the shocker "when you've finished raping my inner child" I love that :)
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A former member wrote:
I love you.. you know? ~Lost
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On Saturday, January 20, 2007, The Crimson Queen
(917) wrote:
"Our lips will touch and our souls will meet. For the first time, we'll know who we are." That was pure brilliance that only you possess..
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On Saturday, January 20, 2007, The Crimson Queen
(917) wrote:
"Drink my thoughts. And swirl my perception around into the crevices of your mouth." I think I'd almost forgotten how beautifully you wrote... Thanks for the reminder.
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A former member wrote:
:) hmm. i love it.
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On Thursday, January 18, 2007, carlosjackal
(2788) wrote:
This was superb. And the last 3 lines were amazing..a real jolt to the system. Write the hell on..
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On Thursday, November 30, 2006, Mylissa
(825) wrote:
Amazingly...beautiful.
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On Thursday, November 30, 2006, veingo
(526) wrote:
Oh how I love it when you post. I never know what to expect, but you always blow me away. Thank you for that. ^V^
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On Thursday, November 30, 2006, Dissolving Poet
(560) wrote:
*sigh* I've missed your writing's Brit, this was.. beautifully done my heart snapped into tiny twigs.... Your love made me get overwhelmed and lost in the sea of words that over-lapped me again and again ~Gothic
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A former member wrote:
"spit me out and/tell me who I am." You are simply GORGEOUS...to feel so intensely these emotions, to find a place where such things exist...it's something we all strive for. I agree with Esau as well. ~*Beth*~
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On Thursday, November 30, 2006, TaintedButterfly
(653) wrote:
Nice to see you writing again Britt. This was WOW! I think Esau says it best, I echo his words. Julia~
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On Thursday, November 30, 2006, MESUN
(230) wrote:
another demonstration of talent. beautiful and towering. strong and soft. excellent.
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On Thursday, November 30, 2006, elisa
(1595) wrote:
from top to bottom..... a perfect pyramid of words..... foundation to point.... 'who i am'....well done.
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On Thursday, November 30, 2006, verablue
(106) wrote:
"spit me out and tell me who I am." love it!