Comments by All Members
- "Such a brave piece of writing, selfless and responsibly written for all to see, yet there's only one that needs to take heed in your past trials that have given you a shit load of wisdom, I hope it works out for you....really felt your intentions."
Posted by Unknown on "Sullen Thoughts" by RubyXero
- "Reading this, I feel I've missed so much. I kept everything I've ever thought on paper to myself or the shredder, for fear of others scolding opinions or *insert depricating self loathing comment here". This just instills the idea in me that no matter the words, the thoughts, the rhythmic or stoic stanzas to the spoken word insanity, it will always be beautiful as it's always from the heart, from everyone, forever. And reading this, you've just filled my day with an unexpected joy I didn't count when I woke up this morning. How can you thank someone when a Thank You, isn't enough? For me, this day, to you, it isn't, but thank you."
Posted by Aleas on "For Every Single Poet" by RubyXero
- "well she got arrested the other day... i've been named the supplier. now our parents know everything and she wants to be emancipated even though she's 18 in 6 months. its a big mess...i tried telling her she was getting too far. she wont realize it til she hits rock bottom...she's on her own now"
Posted by RubyXero on "Sullen Thoughts" by RubyXero
- "have you said these words to her? i'm sure she won't want to listen but that's where you start. i have a feeling you already know that. (toying with an old phrase here) an emotional journey begins with expressing a single thought. i will admit though i am far from someone to give advice in this area. although i will say to remember that we can show someone the way, but it is left in their hands whether or not they'll stay on the path. i'm rambling. keep hopeful, but always ready."
Posted by MESUN on "Sullen Thoughts" by RubyXero
- "I know exactly how you feel..I have younger siblings that I love and not being a great role model...they made mistakes but I think the support that we can offer is more than some will ever know...congrats and good luck w/ the baby... :) Thanks for posting this."
Posted by Narcissa on "Sullen Thoughts" by RubyXero
- "Reaching out, to what's closest to you but yet so far. Very sincere, with the best of intentions to help. It's tough watching it play out so close to home. Powerful write."
Posted by Taunting The Reaper on "Sullen Thoughts" by RubyXero
- "Personal, powerful, poignant. ;) The first stanza shatters the mirror it mentions, and the rest... I was moved."
Posted by Sketso on "Sullen Thoughts" by RubyXero
- "nice...real nice - I adore the second line - fantastic use of 'meshing' it adds a real harsh metallic sense yet seems to fit perfectly...combining - and the tongue/myself/strangers comparison is als very apt for the second half of this poem. Top work, smooth and slightly wistful, I loved reading it - well dones!"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Shadowed by Words" by RubyXero
- "the very rusting of the human soul - a billion (and a cigarette packetful) people's reflection for real...the slwly corroding nature of thought melded into word-spatter - pitter patter, like pointless rain just hammering on the window...hmmmm: "I'm in the streets, I'm in the gutter...it's years since I've had bread or buttterrrr" Sorry bout that - that was done in the British sitcom " Game On" - first series, very funny!"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Beneath the Remains" by RubyXero
- "well, seeing as i'm a twisted fuck...THAT WAS FUCKING AWESOME!! the imagery was the shit, very vivid. I felt the terrible passion, and the pulsating fear. God this is the the very thing I've been wanting to get out, but i've been having some writer's block. Excellent, fucking excellent."
Posted by MESUN on "Rein of Terror... Pt. 2 ( WARNING: ADULT CONTENT)" by RubyXero
- "This is really neat. It sort of seems like it's just an experiment, a throwing together of words in hope that they'll flow, yet it seems so planned. Sometimes we write the most interesting things at 4 in the morning, when we are barely concsious, unable to put too much thought into anything. In summary, I like it. "Flaking.../shards of this self/begin to flutter away./To flee in a mocking enmity." Those lines are particularly swell."
Posted by wilted on "Beneath the Remains" by RubyXero
- "this piece was more of a...lying in the gutter and feeling yourself break into a thousand little pieces and fly away kind of thing. take into consideration i wrote it at like 4 am. :)"
Posted by RubyXero on "Beneath the Remains" by RubyXero
- "This at first doesn't seem to say much, but I re-read it twice and realized that each phrase said much much more than I first noticed. The "flaking" section I took to represent change, in some form, which itself is a simple idea, but often the details are intricate. I have no problem believing that these simple words thrown together with such precision do represent intricate ideas and feelings. (also I know what spatter is, that's fucking cool. lol)"
Posted by MESUN on "Beneath the Remains" by RubyXero
- "Now that, was fucking awesome! That freaking took the feelings The Pit and the Pendulum and fucking beefed 'em up tenfold. I read that and I was actually able to taste the fear. Beautifully done."
Posted by MESUN on "Rein of Terror ...Part 1" by RubyXero
- "Good. The disjointedness is amazing. I literally sang this instead of saying it, because it was necessary. Can't wait for blood and guts and gore."
Posted by wilted on "Rein of Terror ...Part 1" by RubyXero
- "ouch... well, I hope you get to see them again soon. Thanks for the bump, too :) Hang tough, things will straighten themselves out eventually. In the meantime, post something angry. That always works for me."
Posted by Chimauron on "Fade Out" by RubyXero
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