Comments by All Members
- "Good lord, you are a dark soul. Thank-you for a well written piece. 'my corpse soley left in ruins.' Brilliant! write on. "
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "A Lone Night" by RubyXero
- "beautifully ,visually written ,thank you for sharing ,this was awesome ."
Posted by Unknown on "Mirrors" by RubyXero
- "Truely a wonderful mind you have. You are a gifted poet. The visuals were captivating to say the least. Your moment, your story had such a great ending, fine darkness. Thank-you so much. "
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "Mirrors" by RubyXero
- "I am sorry I have missed your work, it won't happen again. I am so impressed.
A dark visual that speaks volumes. I loved the line 'mountains of their agonies.'
Perfect context, perfect flow. thanks."
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "Bury Me In Decayed Embraces" by RubyXero
- "Chilling realizations are often found when we look inside ourselves but I think this process should be mandatory, "Keeping myself guarded and unfeeling
until far too late for recovery" How I can relate to your words. A very gripping read."
Posted by Dilated View on "Mirrors" by RubyXero
- "There is a quote I'm reminded of reading that last line: "and light only penetrates the darkness that's already there, and I am already there." And to think she smiles at you every day!..and probably screams for you in the middle of the night when all you want is 5 consecutive minutes of sleep but hot damn if it ain't worth it all! I can't believe this was hardly commented on. Shame be to the commenters! "
Posted by Aleas on "Mirrors" by RubyXero
- "i very much enjoyes the flow in this piece...it painted a picture in my head that pulled me further in with every line...the emotion is raw and intense.....very nice write....(and thank you for your comments =] )"
Posted by UnrequitedDream on "Mirrors" by RubyXero
- "..to refrain from judgment and observe with objectivity.. can really create the right conditions for growth for both parties... a sentiment wonderfully told."
Posted by Unknown on "Oservant Shadow" by RubyXero
- "There was something sweet in this poem. I visualized watching and listening to my children around the corner. Thank you for sharing. =)"
Posted by Unknown on "Oservant Shadow" by RubyXero
- "This felt like a thought process and, in the end, like possibly you answered some of your initial questions. I can relate to the bit about remaining idle, often am torn by inaction. Interesting read."
Posted by Dilated View on "Faithless One..." by RubyXero
- "I read this before but I forgot to comment, this is a very interesting and inspired piece of work, like it is being acted right in front of your eyes, theatrical and exciting, you can see the anticipation and glittering eyes, really wonderful work."
Posted by Unknown on "Behind the Curtain" by RubyXero
- "endurance. your strength to surive is in itself its own reward. bittersweet (hell probably tastes like ass) at times i'm sure, but it's still a reward."
Posted by MESUN on "I Wont Ask" by RubyXero
- "kick ass! in the past few months i too have gotten into the same boat. lotsa smiles, too bad right now i'm gritting my teeth too. (what's with you girls and little meaningless things becoming huge issues when you're on the rag? lol) hope all is well, and keeps going well."
Posted by MESUN on "2009-08-05 Journal Entry" by RubyXero
- "ah Baudelaires words or indeed inspiring. I am Guessing you mean Charles of course. If not forgive me for being mistaken. Besides that I really liked this. Makes you look at the positive in the negative. I believe every human needs all emotions in order to operate."
Posted by Distorted_Reality on "A(new) Dawn Approaches" by RubyXero
- "you ever leave work or a any location only to find yourself back home completley oblivious as to how you got there,.... like an instinctual type homeing device perhaps,... thats what happened here for me.... i fell into your write."
Posted by Unknown on "Rain Kissed Permanence" by RubyXero
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