Comments by All Members
- "I actually liked the visual effect on the page, how it tapered upwards. It was almost as if, the more panicked the writing got, the more words you had to fit into a line, like you felt like you were running out of time. And the fact that the final line is shorter instills a sort of cold calm. I like."
Posted by Unknown on "Hell Hounds" by Possesion
- "This was an instant grabber, due to it's explosive metaphor but total lack of representation of the point! Maybe that was your agenda the whole time! Great Write!"
Posted by Spiral Downward on "Silencing the past." by Possesion
- "is there anything you wouldn't say? always when i read your words, there can be no error in what you wanted to say. there is no escaping the truths you bleed. I am again sorrowed. but al the better for it"
Posted by serotonin lost on "sin addiction" by Possesion
- "a fissure of the skin youre in; a brazen psuedo.confession, almost a lure to seek out those which hold the same tastes as you. . .wicked little web....well written; like the classical look and feel of it as well .ness."
Posted by Unknown on "sin addiction" by Possesion
- "jeesh...you go away for a while and come back with a BANG! This was a bomb to reality, blowing everything into question and leaving me churning incoherencies around in my mind. Welcome back, Po! ~*Beth*~"
Posted by Unknown on "Father, I falter." by Possesion
- "This was pure and heartfelt, something that made me sit backa nd try not to cry. I feel almost as though it were too personal to say anything. Just beautiful. Congrats on a wonderufl write."
Posted by Loketha Angel on "Father, I falter." by Possesion
- ""Follow the Cross Home" how powerful those words..a crucifixion and a mad mad girl"
Posted by Karma Doll on "Whore" by Possesion
- "hey! You posted it! I got to read this first folks, special priviledge see!!! This is a sprinkle of fairy dust magic gone wrong. Menacing like tattered scarecrows in a field, urban myths and legends teasing our fragile minds - V/nice!"
Posted by Shadow Rapture on "for my real life Pixie Queen" by Possesion
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