Excerpts From a Victim. Part. 1

By Possesion

Excerpts From a Victim.:

I Was drunk, I had partied all night, and screamed at my best friend to let me go. And he did, he could never have stopped me.

I had been walking for almost an hour, and was barely out of town. Very few cars passed me this late at night.

I had just turned down a ride from a male in his mid to late thirties in big 80s style glasses. he scared me.

I was so drunk I hadn't even noticed the effects pull me down.
but I kept walking, still walking.

Headlights behind me coming slowly and they pull beside me,
"Hey sweet Cheeks" I had forgotten about my skirt.

too short, too tight, at that moment i felt exposed, but i kept walking. there were three teenage guys in the car next to me.

"I donf neeed a ryde hume" So drunk my tongue felt misused in my mouth. I kept walking but they just cruised at an easy 5 an hour next to me with the windows down.

"We don't mind giving you a lift, it will be okay." He'd noticed the stains from tears and eyeliner on my cheeks.

"Okay..." and i opened the door and i got in sloppily.
"Just get me home safely Please" i asked, The first non-idiotic, thought out thing i'd said all night.

It would have been another hours walk. I knew I was stupid for leaving that party. I Scolded myself and prayed to god the only way i knew how..Silently.

My Unanswered Prayer.: Dear god just please get me home. tomorrow is sunday, i'll be too hungover for morning mass but i can make it at night, please god just get me home safely. I know im mislead and i've lied to you before. But your supposed to forgive me! please..

"So you can call me Shane, i'm only 13" I Saw the driver flinch in front of me, but i didnt take it into examination. I noticed the eyes of the other two passengers shoot worriedly to the driver but he seemed to not notice..

12 minutes into the ride, it had gotten quiet... When the car stopped. And i idiotically mentioned "But i'm not home".

The driver got out and the door next to me opened, I looked to him almost expectantly, but i was grabbed from behind. the one in the backseat next to me. His hands were soft but his grip was firm. and then he put the cloth to my mouth and i held my breath and bit his hand.

It didnt matter that he'd dropped the cloth. the driver grabbed my ankles and dragged me out of the car. the one who'd so kindly tryed to drug me shook his head and i heard him say "This could have been so easy for you"

We'd turned off of the highway, into what seemed like a driveway. but there was no home.

My head hit while falling out of the car. i stumbled to get up, i could really feel the effects of my alcohol abuse shaking me. Damn that bottle of jack daniels that held me so close.

The passengers now out of the car. the one so caring wouldn't restrain me, but the other two had no objections.

And i felt myself hit the dirt. i noticed i'd landed on a rock. it hurt.
but it was nothing as to what would come. the driver was the leader i could feel it in his words as he shouted orders to his boys. The walked off slightly, as he ripped open my corset.

"So damn hot and so damn young, i got lucky tonight"
My skirt no longer there and i felt that i was bare.


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Copyright 2005 Shay Holland
Published on Saturday, August 6, 2005.     Filed under: "Non-Fiction" and "Short Story"
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  • Erotic Asphyxiation On Monday, March 16, 2015, Erotic Asphyxiation (13)By person wrote:

    This makes me angry. This makes me so angry. You wrote it so well. This makes me so angry and there are no words I can string together in any language to accurately convey the level of my rage.

  • MidSummers Eve On Tuesday, September 13, 2005, MidSummers Eve (38)By person wrote:

    If i had the power, none of this would have happened, to you or anyone else, i hope you got revenge for what these *uckers did to you.

  • MidSummers Eve On Tuesday, September 13, 2005, MidSummers Eve (38)By person wrote:

    But it was really well written, thank you for opening up to us.

  • A former member wrote: This really is....uncomfortable....but amazingly written....please keep going, your writing's amazing

  • TheBardOfBlasphemy On Thursday, September 1, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy (357)By person wrote:

    this is terrible... i feel sick thinking about part 2... hope it involves several castrations

  • Doc On Monday, August 15, 2005, Doc (143)By person wrote:

    I teach criminal countermeausures so that people have a better chance of not being in a sitation like this, i wish more people took advantage of it.

  • Doc On Monday, August 15, 2005, Doc (143)By person wrote:

    Its horrible. If you care this is what ive actualy dedicated some part of my life trying to prevent, I teach women criminal countermeasures, so that in the event of this, even while intoxicated, they have a better chance of getting out of it, or not getti

  • ApathysKiss On Sunday, August 7, 2005, ApathysKiss (377)By person wrote:

    oh my, this is the worst thing that could happen to anybody....i felt this so bad =( i sympathise with you. i've met a low-life similar to them in a date.

  • ApathysKiss On Sunday, August 7, 2005, ApathysKiss (377)By person wrote:

    luckily he never got far, i was strong enought to fend him off. despite the fact the responses seem to blame you for your clothes, there is no excuse for any guy to rape a woman or vice versa for that matter.

  • Possesion On Sunday, August 7, 2005, Possesion (136)By person wrote:

    Thanks for actually getting that, I personally think Yeah, Maybe my style of dress could be wrong, But that doesn't give anyone the right to hurt me. Glad to hear you got away okay on a date with a loser, date rapes are horrible... Rape is wide-spread and

  • Possesion On Sunday, August 7, 2005, Possesion (136)By person wrote:

    it doesn't matter what your wearing, or where you are. I've found that out from the support groups I've been shoved into.

  • ApathysKiss On Monday, August 8, 2005, ApathysKiss (377)By person wrote:

    besides, you were at a party...unless there's some hidden stupid logic to dress like a 'dag.' yeah...

  • Six-Out On Tuesday, August 9, 2005, Six-Out (1423)By person wrote:

    Not so much conservative old fashioned clothes, it just pisses me off to see children running around in shit that barely covers anything. It's not old fashioned dear, it's just what I consider decency.

  • ApathysKiss On Tuesday, August 9, 2005, ApathysKiss (377)By person wrote:

    [cont.] when you grow up and have kids six i'd like to see you keep your teenaged daughters in conservative old-fashioned clothes. my initial comment was exactly that. pfft.

  • ApathysKiss On Tuesday, August 9, 2005, ApathysKiss (377)By person wrote:

    [to below] you have a point with getting drunk but no i don't have a problem with a 14 year old dressed scantily at a party because they do that these days, it's called being a 'teenager.'

  • Six-Out On Monday, August 8, 2005, Six-Out (1423)By person wrote:

    You don't see a problem with a 14 year old being dressed scantily, and drunk at a party?

  • Possesion On Monday, August 8, 2005, Possesion (136)By person wrote:

    You have a point ^_^

  • serotonin lost On Saturday, August 6, 2005, serotonin lost (140)By person wrote:

    so should these boys, all of them. how's your faith? because if there is a god then he aloud this happen. maybe you should re-concider your beliefs.

  • Six-Out On Saturday, August 6, 2005, Six-Out (1423)By person wrote:

    Who would want a God that changed things because we made stupid decisions?

  • Possesion On Saturday, August 6, 2005, Possesion (136)By person wrote:

    i've already lost hope in my fathers God.

  • Six-Out On Saturday, August 6, 2005, Six-Out (1423)By person wrote:

    So...you were drunk at a party, wearing skimpy clothes, and are only 14? Your parents should be shot.

  • Possesion On Saturday, August 6, 2005, Possesion (136)By person wrote:

    I agree. But what can I say.

  • Six-Out On Saturday, August 6, 2005, Six-Out (1423)By person wrote:

    That if you weren't drunk at a party, and wearing skimpy clothes walking down a dark highway at night, that this wouldn't happen?

  • Possesion On Saturday, August 6, 2005, Possesion (136)By person wrote:

    Point well taken.

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