Whore
By Possesion
Whore so beaten and dishelved. lies of love and hate breed. breed seething
hate into the womb of your body.
follow the cross home.
apathy seethes the soul to see such filth. caked. your body outcast unclean
unpure! your path to nihilation so clear. self deviation. year of the whore
bile in my throat cutting through your pain. held in for years and grown
inside. hiding a murder deep inside her. cum choking whore. white teeth
glare, sharpened claws glisten in the light. your hunger ensues madness
for your hate to love them all.spectrum eyes shown. murder them all, drink
your tea, blood dripping showing your ungodly ways. you are the slut and
the baby girl. thanks to the complex, givin from your dad. suck fuck dick
20 dollars a hit. what a way to live my life. what I've become, now is
going grey and decayed. my apostasy confessed.
The monster inside Grows.
Comments on "Whore"
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On Thursday, September 15, 2005, CorruptedLittleGirl
(243) wrote:
Very well-expressed. I can sadly relate to this, in some ways.
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On Tuesday, September 13, 2005, MidSummers Eve
(38) wrote:
life sucks sometimes, Really good composition, it gives the feelings and thoughts More solid form in this reality, forcing it on the reader, very nicly done.
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On Monday, August 15, 2005, Doc
(143) wrote:
They always do
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On Wednesday, August 17, 2005, Possesion
(136) wrote:
With a few exceptions.
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On Sunday, August 14, 2005, Thorn
(282) wrote:
Damn, indeed. It's powerful.
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On Tuesday, August 9, 2005, blue
(1409) wrote:
grrr.. damn, that just cut right through me.. some interesting lines you've woven here. Altogether affecting. ~b
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On Thursday, August 4, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy
(357) wrote:
i liked the scatter of it... chaos and pain... i've been experimenting with this lately too... sometimes a clouded meaning means more! There was some really shattering imagery in here... hope things get better ;)
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On Thursday, August 4, 2005, stormtalk
(727) wrote:
A chilling description of an often-chilling profession... I certainly hope this isn't biographical! Many intense lines... a couple were a little unclear, but for the most part, they were sharp and clear as diamond.
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On Thursday, August 4, 2005, Possesion
(136) wrote:
slightly biographical. but not Oh So entirely. I took past lines of a murderous whore whom I love and made us this highly enjoyable write. got a big lashing out from my friend J.T though. =(
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On Thursday, September 15, 2005, CorruptedLittleGirl
(243) wrote:
Would this murderous whore happen to be Aileen Wournos? Or am I completely off here? heh
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On Thursday, September 15, 2005, Possesion
(136) wrote:
You find yourself off there, Though now i think about it, There are similarities no doubt. (There are far too many whores in this day and age)
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On Wednesday, August 3, 2005, bloody LOVEly
(85) wrote:
there is a monster in us all.