Comments by All Members
- "I liked the spin on this one. It's more raw and unrefined that normal cutter poems, and I think that truly makes it your own. Congrats, Jake. you've taken an exhausted concept, and put an interesting spin on it to make something that's well worth the time"
Posted by Thorn on "On the perforated line" by Nail Bunny
- "Mmm yes. I know this issue. I also know that it came from him being a weirdo. Well written, I like the flow and meter... and I just love it in general."
Posted by PoeticHellion on "Letter to a friend" by Nail Bunny
- "Christ Jake, I can actually sit here and read your poetry and *gasp* not loose interest like I do with so many other people. Well done. I like it a lot a lot."
Posted by PoeticHellion on "Answer my... Hope" by Nail Bunny
- "Shitgod, Jakob (I'm aware that that looks German). Well done. I almost want to like... hit something. Very well written, very powerful. But don't you be doing anything like that anytime soon."
Posted by PoeticHellion on "On the perforated line" by Nail Bunny
- "And it's been people like this author who have been the driving force behind almost every recent social revolution. It's always been those who have it bad enough to complain, but are well-off enough to speak out."
Posted by Thorn on "To the parents of every teen" by Nail Bunny
- "Jake, you created quite a stir with this one. But what I think the critics fail to recognize is the natural teenage inclination to dissent. This write was not inspired by abusive or controlling parents, but by teen angst and the clash of generations."
Posted by Thorn on "To the parents of every teen" by Nail Bunny
- "Ahahaha! This is so very wonderful. Every image you've portrayed here, every stinking rotten thing about this holiday, stands out in neon-tendrils. *Evangel*"
Posted by Unknown on "Valentine's day" by Nail Bunny
- "i liked that...but when time comes to say that to the people who need to hear it most, they dont want to hear it which is just as fucked up as everything else!"
Posted by Unknown on "Fuck You!" by Nail Bunny
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