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Un Amor Desperado Y Una Alma Perdida
By Spiritus_Frumenti
When I think about love,
I think about sadness
I think about saying goodbye
for the last time
When I think about love,
I think about surrender
I think about utter hopelessness
And truthfully feeling
there's nothing in the world
that could save me
When I think about love,
I think about dying
I think about moments in life
so beautiful,
I wish it could all end right there...
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On Saturday, April 19, 2008, Mari
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wrote:
God you're so much more eloquent than the rest of us. We all swoon to hear you speak.
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On Wednesday, June 13, 2007, Alanarchy
(1168) wrote:
I can't compose my thoughts on this as eloquently and expressively as did solace. I will say, that I devoured every syllable. and the title is simply perfect. beautiful.
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On Wednesday, June 13, 2007, Solace
(1065) wrote:
I think you've pointed out something important here - that the depth of feeling is the same. That one can take from something feelings as deep as...they create each other in a very integral way and in a way become each other
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On Wednesday, June 13, 2007, Solace
(1065) wrote:
You can see this in art of any kind - what is beautiful is surrendering to sadness, to love - to anything - like falling from the top of a building, it encompasses so much sadness and love and beauty that it transforms
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On Wednesday, June 13, 2007, Solace
(1065) wrote:
Those moments in life that are so beautiful are sad in themselves - beauty that brings one to tears, ave maria sung in hushed tones - to seperate is to remove them...for the nature of both is to accompany the other
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On Wednesday, June 13, 2007, Spiritus_Frumenti
(340) wrote:
you are absolutely right...and you expressed it beautifully, too....your comments always add another level of poetic value to my work...-l-
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On Wednesday, June 13, 2007, GraveFlower
(240) wrote:
awe..............love wouldnt feel so good if you didnt know hate, joy wouldnt feel so good if it wasnt for pain.......beautiful
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On Wednesday, June 13, 2007, Moonflower
(298) wrote:
i truly loved this
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