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Words can never hurt me
By veingo
I'm all that's left,
of what I was.
I didn't mean to disappoint you.
As you whisper blades,
into my ear.
I'm sorry I let you down.
Trying to make it better,
only makes it worse.
I had the best intentions.
Now aim your tongue,
down at my heart.
I'm sure we'll both feel better.
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© 2007 veingo
Published on Monday, June 4, 2007.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Thursday, January 19, 2012, Cattarax
(216)
wrote:
"trying to make it better only makes it worth" True words of wisdom! So I just give up and let it slide ... while pretending not to care .. awesome!
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A former member wrote:
An amazing man and artist behind those words. Damn! :)
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On Friday, August 24, 2007, NikesRain
(1298) wrote:
heartfelt and saddening... it takes a lot to say i'm sorry and mean it... the last lines were crushing... well done
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On Monday, June 25, 2007, Mylissa
(845) wrote:
This is so powerful with subtle intensity. I enjoyed it. Very much!
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A former member wrote:
I can picture someone screaming at the child in each one of us through these words. I guess in a way, atleast in some instances, hurting is a choice. So unessecary. I guess you can't blame someone for being ignorant of you. ~Awesome Fucking Write~
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On Thursday, June 21, 2007, Aunty Depressant
(434) wrote:
I like how you (if you are indeed the subject) just take it like man for apparently being a naughty boy.
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On Monday, June 25, 2007, veingo
(533) wrote:
I think you took this the wrong way. It wasn't an admission of guilt, for something. It's an apology for not being able to make her happy. But I thank you for reading :)-
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On Monday, June 18, 2007, urbanhumility
(1175) wrote:
delivered with concise intelligent words...............poetry indeed!
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On Friday, June 8, 2007, Err0r
(365) wrote:
oooh. Very nice V. I like the use of turning a mere woman into a killing machine =)
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On Thursday, June 21, 2007, Err0r
(365) wrote:
I reread this again and it's still so great. Love it. :D
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A former member wrote:
just piercing; and you gave us just enough room to breathe [or hurt] between the lines. . ..wow...ness.
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A former member wrote:
indeed. lovely, ron. you're lovely.
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A former member wrote:
Heartbreaking. I've missed you Ron.
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On Tuesday, June 5, 2007, Sin
(1168) wrote:
ouch...your words break me
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On Tuesday, June 5, 2007, Army Barbie
(324) wrote:
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On Tuesday, June 5, 2007, Army Barbie
(324) wrote:
I love you. You know this.
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A former member wrote:
jeesh...I miss you when you're silent for so very long. I see you every now and then on chatter, but I don't usually stop to say hello...maybe I should. Anyway. I read. I love. And I thank you for this, it's excellent. ~*Beth*~
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On Monday, June 4, 2007, Moonflower
(301) wrote:
ooooh that was nice.
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