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Bubble Wrap
By veingo
The truth is dry leaves
beneath her feet.
Love is bubble wrap
that she can't resist the urge to pop.
Her life is a sand castle
and she's just waiting for the tide.
Do not love her.
Do not devote to her.
Do not even care.
And when you do,
don't say I didn't warn you.
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© 2007 veingo
Published on Monday, May 28, 2007.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Bubble Wrap"
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A former member wrote:
Sick piece.. I wanna pop some bubble wrap now for some reason... *runs to the store to buy some* :)
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A former member wrote:
nice
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On Wednesday, September 5, 2007, Reefer_rave
(146)
wrote:
Definatly loves the bubblewrap too. agrees with so many of the comments I think i'll just leave it at that.
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A former member wrote:
*sigh* greatness. :)
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On Tuesday, May 29, 2007, Rhys Ki
(68) wrote:
I am loving the metaphor! And the spacing is very unique. Glad you got through your writer's block!
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A former member wrote:
fantastic.. simple as that
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On Tuesday, May 29, 2007, elisa
(1616) wrote:
..the package must fit the box just right ....to make the bubble wrap *pop* perfectly :*)
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On Tuesday, May 29, 2007, veingo
(532) wrote:
Oh yeah. A proper fit is very important ;)-
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On Tuesday, May 29, 2007, elisa
(1616) wrote:
paramount, even;)
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On Tuesday, May 29, 2007, carlosjackal
(3011) wrote:
Ahh...the brevity of this one hit home perfectly. Fuckin' beautiful one -Carl
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On Monday, May 28, 2007, Army Barbie
(324) wrote:
You writing about me Ronnykins? Lol kidding. I dunno, i loved it. If I had room it would be faved. Muah
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On Monday, May 28, 2007, blue
(1454) wrote:
I know this one. I know. o.O))
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