Bubble Wrap

By veingo

The truth is dry leaves

beneath her feet.

Love is bubble wrap

that she can't resist the urge to pop.

Her life is a sand castle

and she's just waiting for the tide.

Do not love her.

Do not devote to her.

Do not even care.

And when you do,

don't say I didn't warn you.

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Published on Monday, May 28, 2007. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "Bubble Wrap"

A former member wrote: Sick piece.. I wanna pop some bubble wrap now for some reason... *runs to the store to buy some* :)
A former member wrote: nice
On Wednesday, September 5, 2007, Reefer_rave (139) wrote:

Definatly loves the bubblewrap too. agrees with so many of the comments I think i'll just leave it at that.
A former member wrote: *sigh* greatness. :)
On Tuesday, May 29, 2007, Rhys Ki (68) wrote:

I am loving the metaphor! And the spacing is very unique. Glad you got through your writer's block!
A former member wrote: fantastic.. simple as that
On Tuesday, May 29, 2007, elisa (1595) wrote:

..the package must fit the box just right ....to make the bubble wrap *pop* perfectly :*)
On Tuesday, May 29, 2007, veingo (526) wrote:

Oh yeah. A proper fit is very important ;)-
On Tuesday, May 29, 2007, elisa (1595) wrote:

paramount, even;)
On Tuesday, May 29, 2007, carlosjackal (2788) wrote:

Ahh...the brevity of this one hit home perfectly. Fuckin' beautiful one -Carl
On Monday, May 28, 2007, Army Barbie (316) wrote:

You writing about me Ronnykins? Lol kidding. I dunno, i loved it. If I had room it would be faved. Muah
On Monday, May 28, 2007, blue (1409) wrote:

I know this one. I know. o.O))