One in the chamber, I left it for you...
By Imsosickxxx
I am the bomb that's meant to burn
and burn I will in killing terms
and wound the weak, the meak, and poor
a hundred fold, a hundred score
and in the flames you'll burn and rot
and be the few that time forgot
when every tragedy has masked
the one before but not the last
this semblance is a dreadful thing
of needing you in fading dreams
and this is what you've made of me
one last ticking entity
a title for a magazine
a news flash filled with violent screams
and nothing you can do will stay
down on your knees I watched you pray
you swore to me you said forever
you thought that you could be so clever
loving him behind my back
look at the anger you exact
the vengence still that haunts this man
the blood is now upon your hands
and everyone that you once knew
will be the very death of you
since their death screams a melody
that mirrors your infidelities
I hope this gunshot still rings true
I loathe even the death of you
Comments on "One in the chamber, I left it for you..."
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On Friday, May 25, 2007, Revisable Retina
(81) wrote:
wow dude your damn good write on man write on loved this work of yours...
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On Monday, May 21, 2007, Army Barbie
(316) wrote:
Sucks. Not the poem, but the reason behind it. But shit, makes for good writes. Can't believe I missed this one.
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On Saturday, May 19, 2007, mysterylove
(97) wrote:
i like this a lot =) its powerful..
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On Thursday, May 17, 2007, Vilification
(20) wrote:
past is past, and the time is now...so go ahead and put your past on down, foget those who have screwed shit up, be happy and let the world know you dont give a fuck....Live fast and die young is our motto, so once again just let shit go....6 months left
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On Thursday, May 17, 2007, Vilification
(20) wrote:
and then we go home to have fun and drowned any sorrows still lingering
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A former member wrote:
Incredible! I am definatley marking this as one of my favorites!
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A former member wrote:
I don't recommend giving this to who it is ment for. the government frowns upon bomb/gun threats =)