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Would You Like Some Cheese With That Whine
By liquid_emotion
You’re looking jaded
But I’m watching the sun fade
Talking about life
While I’m ready to live once I die
You hate these moments
I’m living them
Knowing they will pass
You keep looking back
I save that for nighttime dreams
Don’t hand me your burdens
On a platter of conversation
Because I’m fasting
Living off contemplation
Wake up and look beyond yourself
Pathetic and whining
I see you and move on
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Copyright 2003 liquid_emotion
Published on Sunday, April 20, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Would You Like Some Cheese With That Whine"
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On Thursday, February 22, 2007, Sin
(1135)
wrote:
haha this hit the spot this morning...i love it ~kristy
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A former member wrote:
"Don’t hand me your burdens
On a platter of conversation
Because I’m fasting "
that was absolutely great, i loved it
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On Tuesday, April 22, 2003, KittyStryker
(710) wrote:
yes! goddamn it, yes... i love it.
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On Sunday, April 20, 2003, Seraphic
(209) wrote:
"Don't hand me your burdens on a platter of conversation, because I'm fasting" I love that line, very good poem
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A former member wrote:
ahhh, its good to see ya back. i like this poem. It gives me a lot to think about right now.. :|
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A former member wrote:
Nice write, know what you mean
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