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Where Demons Play (Extended)
By Whisper
The shadows surround me
and take me away
to a place in the darkness
where the demons play
they give me hope
and tell me lies
pulling the covers over my eyes
they play me, betray me
and still I laugh
feeling every ounce of the devils wrath
my mind is broken
and dreams are gone
I wish someone would
tell me what's going on
I don't deserve this
I know it's true
I tried to stop it
but what could I do
I was ripped and torn
like a fucking rag-doll
holding myself and
curling into a ball
my tears flow freely
as do my sobs
as the shadows race towards me
like an angry mob
grinning and snarling
like a pack of beasts
racing towards a long awaited feast
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© 2007 Whisper
Published on Tuesday, April 3, 2007.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Where Demons Play (Extended)"
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On Friday, July 4, 2008, Blinded_Tiger
(518)
wrote:
flawless rhyme. maybe "a fucking rag-doll" and "a ball" is a weak point but it depends .. would have to hear you say it. It is all in the mouth lalala--hrhr. It is, fuck silent black and white dp poetry. This is not either. Thank you for this free and somewhat safe journey.
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On Tuesday, February 26, 2008, GraveFlower
(249) wrote:
.m......this reminds me of,,,,,a movie,i dont know what fucking movie it is,,,but, i can picture it..you did awesome,,,,good write
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A former member wrote:
liked this...and every comment means something. Thank you for the ones you left me
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A former member wrote:
I like this. I like the flow and the words you used. I agree though, I didn't want it to end there.
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On Tuesday, April 3, 2007, unspeakable truth
(100) wrote:
I "dig it" ;) how it is as well... There is something with the end, in my head makes me want to know if you allowed the feast to begin.
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On Tuesday, April 3, 2007, Spiked Tongue
(22) wrote:
I dig it how it is - This is totally how I write, and I know how you feel to - RC
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