A crystalline glance

By ANGELSLAYER

Her eyes were captivating
Enslaving my soul
With glittering lust

With her gaze
She incites a storm in my heart
Penetrating
Laying me bare

Defenseless I quiver
Ensnared by her crystalline glance
My frozen heart
Erupted in flame

Left catatonic
Not daring to breathe
She offered me eternal life
With just a taste of her essence

Let me drink
From the fountain of life
That flows in you

Begging for just a touch
Of your darkest desires

How can I live
If you turn away
After showing me
This fetid bliss

I'd gladly sacrifice myself
For just a hint of your smile

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© 2007 ANGELSLAYER
Published on Monday, April 2, 2007.     Filed under: "Perverse" and "Poetry"
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  • jajang829 On Saturday, October 24, 2009, jajang829 (23)By person wrote:

    Fantastic, haunting, soothing... thank you for this...

  • A former member wrote: it seems I have to comment on this at least once a year.maybe in hopes that you know I'm still here wondering where the hell YOU are...

  • A former member wrote: I would give you a smile as bright as the harvest moon if you came back to DP once in a while :)

  • unspeakable truth On Monday, April 16, 2007, unspeakable truth (94)By person wrote:

    Beautiful write Scholar

  • Berry Fantastic On Monday, April 2, 2007, Berry Fantastic (28)By person wrote:

    The speaker is very. . . devoted to love. I admire that. Great poem. :)

  • A former member wrote: this was amazing, Michael...so very beautiful, just like your soul. ~Meg

  • Disassembly Boy On Monday, April 2, 2007, Disassembly Boy (59)By person wrote:

    I loved this.. beautiful.

  • blue On Monday, April 2, 2007, blue (1409)By person wrote:

    "for just a hint of your smile" If only the rest of the world could understand.. ~b

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