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A crystalline glance
By ANGELSLAYER
Her eyes were captivating
Enslaving my soul
With glittering lust
With her gaze
She incites a storm in my heart
Penetrating
Laying me bare
Defenseless I quiver
Ensnared by her crystalline glance
My frozen heart
Erupted in flame
Left catatonic
Not daring to breathe
She offered me eternal life
With just a taste of her essence
Let me drink
From the fountain of life
That flows in you
Begging for just a touch
Of your darkest desires
How can I live
If you turn away
After showing me
This fetid bliss
I'd gladly sacrifice myself
For just a hint of your smile
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© 2007 ANGELSLAYER
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On Saturday, October 24, 2009, jajang829
(23)
wrote:
Fantastic, haunting, soothing... thank you for this...
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A former member wrote:
it seems I have to comment on this at least once a year.maybe in hopes that you know I'm still here wondering where the hell YOU are...
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A former member wrote:
I would give you a smile as bright as the harvest moon if you came back to DP once in a while :)
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On Monday, April 16, 2007, unspeakable truth
(100) wrote:
Beautiful write
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On Monday, April 2, 2007, Berry Fantastic
(28) wrote:
The speaker is very. . . devoted to love. I admire that. Great poem. :)
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A former member wrote:
this was amazing, Michael...so very beautiful, just like your soul. ~Meg
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On Monday, April 2, 2007, Disassembly Boy
(61) wrote:
I loved this.. beautiful.
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On Monday, April 2, 2007, blue
(1454) wrote:
"for just a hint of your smile" If only the rest of the world could understand.. ~b
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