Something to be proud of.

By veingo

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as little as I do,
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and still survive.

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Published on Thursday, October 26, 2006. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "Something to be proud of."

A former member wrote: so short yet so powerful. much love me friend. ~ red
On Friday, December 1, 2006, Mylissa (825) wrote:

Now that made me think. Wonderful! :)
A former member wrote: little wrote-but much said. i proud that your surviving too.{applaud}
A former member wrote: I'm still proud... *tears* I... I ... I don't know what to say, I am swollen with pride... :)
On Monday, October 30, 2006, Fading_Smile (29) wrote:

whoa, quite a thoughtful piece there. I totally understand it, very true. Overall, a truly amazing thought. ~Blake
On Sunday, October 29, 2006, Rebel_not_Radical (75) wrote:

~humble in its essence yet filled with pride in it's tone...it's oxymoronic as somehow it gives you something deep and something simple...i liked twist at the end...very cool write
A former member wrote: Not Many People. Life is dead to begin with. Just Push and prevail, and you'll make it ][ ][
On Sunday, October 29, 2006, Cattarax (211) wrote:

....... this is not something to be proud of ... you only get one life and I out of all people know that it can end way to early! ... this deeply saddens me Ron .. that you would be proud of this
On Sunday, October 29, 2006, Cattarax (211) wrote:

surviving isnt everything... I would rather live life to the fullest.. then live every day by doing the least bit possible!
On Saturday, October 28, 2006, urbanhumility (1158) wrote:

the unconcious echo........behind every toll encountered..............urban
A former member wrote: this is complexly simple..think i just made up a phrase, haha. i'm going to have to think on this some more..the lines are already running through my head. as always, this is beautiful. i love you, ron.
On Friday, October 27, 2006, veingo (526) wrote:

Such a wide range of feedback.......Intriguing.
On Friday, October 27, 2006, Kinkypoptart (555) wrote:

wow... beautiful, Ronny one
A former member wrote: perhaps when we think we live least we are living most... gorgeous lil ones can make the least lil thing seem larger than life... you make me so proud :)
On Friday, October 27, 2006, TaintedButterfly (653) wrote:

This is amazing Ron.... truly amazing. Julia~
A former member wrote: hmmmm.. you have to love a little light satire every once in a while. ....-samone
On Thursday, October 26, 2006, Aunty Depressant (423) wrote:

Boring, but you'll live...
A former member wrote: egads, this is minimalist.ic. .visually, i interpret rather as a noose...a rope of words, waiting, wanting, warning. .. .to live..