On That Night
By Midnight Phoenix
Following something or someone
Through the trees and over the rivers
Not sure if distant or near
Find others who speak the same, but again lost
Eventually we lose each other
But I think I’m nearing end
Heart lifts by discovery
Then finds they do not understand
Either I am too far or I’ve been gone too long
I show them where I want to be
Many too afraid of my excitement to speak
They only reply with disbelief in their eyes
And I never find an answer…
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Copyright 2003 little nemo
Published on Tuesday, April 8, 2003.
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On Sunday, December 25, 2005, weyvern
(80) wrote:
powerfull last line there
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On Monday, May 26, 2003, CharlottesWeb
(509) wrote:
Kind of like a puzzle you must be a bit color blind to put together... for me anyhow. Took a few times but I think I grasped it. Nice.~DW~
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A former member wrote:
Another insight that amazes me! wonderful work!
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On Wednesday, June 11, 2003, Rebel_Angel
(321) wrote:
cool...I like it!