Mortal Wound

By Bluegirl

I feel like a candle
I started out as a wick
Small and unprotected
Alone
But things happened,
And I began to grow layers
As the layers grew,
I became less important
The layers were poisonous
Unwanted, scary
Until one day, when I slowly rebuilt my life
The layers were less visible
But there would always be scars there
No one mentioned my past
No one remembered
And I was happy.
Then it happened
A fire was created
The blaze caught ahold of me, and
I was caught in a mass of molten memories
A mortal wound
Spilling my past everywhere
Destroying everything I had worked so hard for
Leaving me alone again,
Leaving me to start over
From scratch
Like a candle

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© 2006 Bluegirl
Published on Friday, September 15, 2006.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"
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  • GothicBlack On Sunday, September 17, 2006, GothicBlack (186)By person wrote:

    Do my eyes deceive me, are you truly really back?!?!?!?1 Yup YAHHHHH Your Back!!! I've missed you and your works. And as always your just as beautiful. ~gothic~

  • Bluegirl On Sunday, September 17, 2006, Bluegirl (177)By person wrote:

    aww, thanks. Yes, I am really back. :)

  • DarkPoet On Saturday, September 16, 2006, DarkPoet (229)By person wrote:

    Welcome back! Scholar

  • Bluegirl On Sunday, September 17, 2006, Bluegirl (177)By person wrote:

    thank you! I've missed it here so much..

  • A former member wrote: "Like a candle" Ahhhhh, you speak volumes to my aching soul, dear. You're a beautiful creature. I'm enjoying seeing your posts, cause I know I'll relate to every word. Beautiful. ~*Beth*~

  • Rachel On Friday, September 15, 2006, Rachel (210)By person wrote:

    Oh my god!!! Wah!!! *does the mega happy dance* You're back, You're back, You're back, You're back, You're back, You're back, You're back, You're back!

  • Bluegirl On Sunday, September 17, 2006, Bluegirl (177)By person wrote:

    Thanks Rachel. it means a lot to be missed. :)

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