Mortal Wound
By Bluegirl
I feel like a candle
I started out as a wick
Small and unprotected
Alone
But things happened,
And I began to grow layers
As the layers grew,
I became less important
The layers were poisonous
Unwanted, scary
Until one day, when I slowly rebuilt my life
The layers were less visible
But there would always be scars there
No one mentioned my past
No one remembered
And I was happy.
Then it happened
A fire was created
The blaze caught ahold of me, and
I was caught in a mass of molten memories
A mortal wound
Spilling my past everywhere
Destroying everything I had worked so hard for
Leaving me alone again,
Leaving me to start over
From scratch
Like a candle
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© 2006 Bluegirl
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On Sunday, September 17, 2006, GothicBlack
(186) wrote:
Do my eyes deceive me, are you truly really back?!?!?!?1 Yup YAHHHHH Your Back!!! I've missed you and your works. And as always your just as beautiful. ~gothic~
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On Sunday, September 17, 2006, Bluegirl
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aww, thanks. Yes, I am really back. :)
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On Saturday, September 16, 2006, DarkPoet
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Welcome back!
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On Sunday, September 17, 2006, Bluegirl
(177) wrote:
thank you! I've missed it here so much..
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A former member wrote:
"Like a candle" Ahhhhh, you speak volumes to my aching soul, dear. You're a beautiful creature. I'm enjoying seeing your posts, cause I know I'll relate to every word. Beautiful. ~*Beth*~
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On Friday, September 15, 2006, Rachel
(210) wrote:
Oh my god!!! Wah!!! *does the mega happy dance* You're back, You're back, You're back, You're back, You're back, You're back, You're back, You're back!
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On Sunday, September 17, 2006, Bluegirl
(177) wrote:
Thanks Rachel. it means a lot to be missed. :)