Bloody Kiss

By Bluegirl

Reposted, as per requested

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I open the door, and enter a world of bitter hate
Where life withers, and happiness dies
At your command.
You wrap me up in your dark embrace
Slowly draining me of life
And exchanging it for something deeper
Something more disturbing
A puncture wound
Infects my body, sending pure venom
Spiraling through my tiny veins
As it courses through my system
I feel myself growing unhumanly cold
I look up at your pale face
Devoid of color
A streak of red streams
From your thin lips
I feel that this is the end
But I am too weak
To escape your grasp of love
And so I will return
Tomorrow night
To my love, my pain - my death.

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© 2006 Bluegirl
Published on Friday, September 15, 2006.     Filed under: "Fantasy" and "Poetry"
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  • Syncretism On Wednesday, February 19, 2014, Syncretism (35)By person wrote:

    This piece speaks to me! Nothing but respect bluegirl.

  • A former member wrote: oh my god..i freaking loved this..it was amazing..

  • CorruptedLittleGirl On Saturday, September 16, 2006, CorruptedLittleGirl (253)By person wrote:

    It brings to mind the image of two lovers in a cold, dark, secluded closet, slowly dying. I'm not sure why. I like it.

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