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Pitch Black Existence
By cemetarydance
Primadonna....what a perfect little bitch
Her hair is shining like the sun
Eyes oozing with sex appeal
Tanned skin that feels so smooth
With makeup just right and clothes in style
She can capture you with just a little smile
But she can never hold you
You're less than perfect and not allowed
Convince her that this life is wrong
Leave throught the open window
Down to the streets and commoners below
A place that she hasn't known
When the truth hits her like a sucker punch
Who do you think she'll some running to?
Tell about the real world
Oh I'd love to hear you explain that one
Now that she knows you turn her loose
Armed with enough hate to swallow the world whole
Turning from anorexic to cannibal she's a monster
Her skin shrieks help me and her soul cries for release
Scars define her deathly pale skin
Dark eyes display all of her despair
Laying here among the ruins of the city
Oh Primadonna you're so beautiful
Lilly Adams
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© 2006 cemetarydance
Published on Friday, September 1, 2006.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Pitch Black Existence"
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A former member wrote:
Correct me if I'm wrong, but the way I interpreted that was the girl was "flawless" and would not associate with "lesser people," until someone showed her how the real world worked, in which case she became destructive, and angry.
If that's correct, I really enjoyed the work. And I agree with the others on here, that line was intense!
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On Friday, September 1, 2006, blue
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wrote:
damn. now that's what I call a bloodletting! "from anorexic to cannibal" that was one hell of a line!! ~b
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