Dying Young

By Myrrhkuri the fallen one

When I was just a
little boy you told me,
that I better change my ways.

I'm a cutter and
I'm a slasher,
I've had my share of fucked up days.

I've been burned and
I've been beaten,
I've been cut with razor blades.

I've been on so
many different drugs,
everything to me's a game.

LIVE WITH THE THOUGHT OF DYING
DIE AT THE THOUGHT OF LIVING..................(CHORUS)
LIVE WITH THE THOUGHT OF DYING YOUNG.

No more laughing and
no more insults,
No more making fun of me.

No more pressure and
No expecting me,
to be something I can not be.

CHORUS repeat

And when my demons finally come for me.
I'm gonna hold my head up...I'm gonna hold my head up...and scream.
I DON'T WANNA BE HERE NO MORE!

I'm a cutter and
I'm a slasher,
I've had my share of fucked up days.

No more pressure and
no expecting me,
to be something I can not be.

And when my demons finally come for me.
I'm gonna hold my head up...I'm gonna hold my head up...and scream.
I DON'T WANNA BE HERE NO MORE!

CHORUS repeat

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© 2005 Myrrhkuri the fallen one
Published on Thursday, November 10, 2005.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Lyrics"
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  • A former member wrote: This is good stuff although i must say that it's never good to have two different chorus' unless it's a duet, and all chorus' should always be repeated twice take it from an artist also work on the rhyme scheme it very well put together you a very talente

  • A former member wrote: (typo and continuation)..it is very well put together and you are very talented, you have the gift much love!!! Forever your boy-PERSEVERANCE-

  • ShardsofSilence On Wednesday, November 23, 2005, ShardsofSilence (219)By person wrote:

    niiiice....i like :)

  • Myrrhkuri the fallen one On Friday, November 11, 2005, Myrrhkuri the fallen one (94)By person wrote:

    thank you!!unfortunatly it's not rap rock I am more a straight up rock guy. I record all my own demos for my song as best as I can with low tech technology

  • A former member wrote: Powerful song. Sounds to me like some explosive fucking RapMetal.

  • Forgotten Angel On Thursday, November 10, 2005, Forgotten Angel (309)By person wrote:

    really good..really really good...i thionk i can relate to this..cuz..like you..im a cutter and all that...although im tryin 2 stop..but anyway..awesome thinking here..very nice -Kel

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