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Save Me
By Crimson Shade
I struggle to regain consciousness,
As I attempt to silence the alarm,
The night has not been kind it seems,
Once more I bear the scars of depression.
Head in hands, I scour my broken mind,
All I find is a tear filled photo album,
Depression’s grip is a strangle hold,
Just reach out and take my hand.
I drag myself out of my self-pity,
As I begin my daily deception to those who care,
I wash away my scars and the water runs red,
Hoping for the night to be kind… just for once.
“Save me one more time my friend, just reach out and take my hand”
– Panic Cell.
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© 2006 Crimson Shade
Comments on "Save Me"
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On Saturday, April 15, 2006, mywristshurt
(405)
wrote:
so breathtaking... i see, i hear, i know exactly whats going on... i like it
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A former member wrote:
Really know where you are coming from can relate to the feeling of reaching out and nobodies there. Very well arranged and put. Good to know you are not alone yet bad to know other people suffer as well as you do.
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On Saturday, February 11, 2006, Wolk
(54) wrote:
Remargable.
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A former member wrote:
hey I like this one will you write back
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On Thursday, January 26, 2006, TaintedButterfly
(653) wrote:
*Holds a hand out to you my friend* This is so beautiful in it's sadness. "Depression’s grip is a strangle hold,/ Just reach out and take my hand." Very powerful and real!! Julia~
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On Thursday, January 26, 2006, darkdesires
(139) wrote:
Wow I love the opening and ending lines in your last verse... I think is definately something that I can feel too. great write.
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A former member wrote:
This is good. I really like it...
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