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Broken bottles hold black roses
By Darkest_Addiction
broken bottles hold black roses
from a dark and dreary past
the roses never wilting for
their lives untouched by change
the bottle holds a pint of
blood to feed the roses need
these roses have lived for ever
and will for eternity
they will not wilt or crumble
to them death will not come
held by jagged broken bottles
and fed by tainted blood
it goes to show that only
the broken hold the eternal
truth
darkness and pain...
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© 2006 Erin mae mcavoy
Published on Tuesday, February 28, 2006.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Broken bottles hold black roses"
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A former member wrote:
"they will not wilt or crumble, to them feath will not come, held by jagged broken bottles, and fed by tainted blood" beautifully written. Just plain genious!
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On Tuesday, February 28, 2006, Christopher7xii
(20)
wrote:
I like this alot, aside from the closing line of darkness and pain. It seems out of place to me, but I'm only an observer. Aside from that minor quip, I like it. Nice write.
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On Tuesday, February 28, 2006, Darkest_Addiction
(44) wrote:
i know what ya mean i couldnt quiet get across what i wanted to say im probly gonna wait awile and then revise and im glad you liked it thank you
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On Tuesday, February 28, 2006, cemetarydance
(21) wrote:
I like this because it paints a picture with the words.
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