Addiction.
By lstdarkness
She walks to shower,
a shawdow of her
former being. The best
years of her life lost
up her nose in a whirl-
wind of white.
The fine white powder,
covers the dresser like
the years first beautiful
snow.
The high is now nothing,
more than a craving.
A hunger that has no
end. Starving thoughts
clutch the straw.
Her fingers still covered,
her numbingly pale flesh,
peeks through the powder.
She sees the skeleton
in the mirror,
Droplets of blood,
from her nose.
Drip.
Drip.
Drip.
Her life swirls down the drian.
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© 2006 lstdarkness
Published on Friday, August 11, 2006.
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A former member wrote:
WOW! my mom is still addicted to almost every drug there is this means alot to me and all my brothers and sisters THANKYOU!!!!
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On Friday, January 5, 2007, GraveFlower
(249) wrote:
wow...this actually means somthing to mean.....my stepmom is in jail right now from this shit.....good job
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On Friday, August 11, 2006, Savannah
(218) wrote:
God, I know this all too well. *chills* It's like one of my own memories..
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On Friday, August 11, 2006, Alanarchy
(1200) wrote:
I've never been addicted to cocaine, although once and a while, I do get cravings. Most of the time, I feel like it's over rated. But some people surly don't, and I've seen what it can do to a person. You captured that like a photograph, or a scratched
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On Friday, August 11, 2006, Alanarchy
(1200) wrote:
up mirror. I'm digging the hell out of your work, man. Write the hell on.
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On Friday, August 11, 2006, TaintedButterfly
(670) wrote:
Addiction is hard to overcome, and I hope this helps to heal whatever it is you're going through or that you've been through, or seen. Nice job! Julia~
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On Friday, August 11, 2006, Arianna
(105) wrote:
change the she to a he, and this poem is something i've seen...too close...too personal... all true. and it can still break my heart. ~jb
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On Friday, August 11, 2006, Spiritus_Frumenti
(341) wrote:
what a beautiful portrayal this was...i wish it would have continued...-l-
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On Friday, August 11, 2006, Rebel_not_Radical
(78) wrote:
~i dont feel that way, cause when your high it seems you have or you die. Cool and simple, although i cant really tell if youve felt that way
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A former member wrote:
This is a good poem. It's sad, but it doesn't bother me.