A Soldier's Dawn
By mysticventures
Blood Red Skys
Blood Red Eyes
Blood Red Ties
Blood Red Lies
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© 2006 mysticventures
Published on Tuesday, July 11, 2006.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Thursday, April 17, 2008, freudian-slip
(236) wrote:
and all the red tape that goes with it. more to come? g
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A former member wrote:
Damn stright MV. A-fuckin'-men.
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On Friday, September 21, 2007, Bella Butchery
(696) wrote:
how true... our inner turmoils and trials bare no resemblance and will never compare to those of a soldier.... simple, but hits with the force of a mac truck
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On Monday, July 24, 2006, sixsixnine
(476) wrote:
damn you! this is love...... huh?
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On Saturday, July 15, 2006, Sin
(1135) wrote:
stinging and powerful, like a slap to the face...its so good to see you posting again ~kristy
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A former member wrote:
Great piece. just a really raw and clear portrayal.
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On Tuesday, July 11, 2006, Dissolving Poet
(560) wrote:
It was just incredible the few words here spoke loudly and higher with each one. ~nightly
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A former member wrote:
I can relate totally with just these few words. I'm a Marine. Great piece.
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On Tuesday, July 11, 2006, sIo
(898) wrote:
this makes my stomach queezy.
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On Tuesday, July 11, 2006, TaintedButterfly
(653) wrote:
Ouch! Such truth in every single line. Julia~
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On Tuesday, July 11, 2006, Army Barbie
(316) wrote:
*Sigh*
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On Tuesday, July 11, 2006, Army Barbie
(316) wrote:
I dunno how to comment on this. Probably because I've seen it damnit.