A Love Mistaken Tragedy

By l mo

Every time I open up
And show him what's inside
I end getting hurt the most
And feel as I have died

I lock myself away from others
And throw away the key
I lock my feelings up inside
So the pain they can not see

I opened up and spilled my soul
And loved him more than ever
But he left me here, alone and broken
To dwell in this pain forever

I never should have trusted him
I never should have cared
I never should have loved him
My soul I never should have bared

Why is it that every time
I trust someone like him
The beginning's always happy
But the ending's always grim

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© 2006 night_sky
Published on Sunday, June 11, 2006.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • Silence On Saturday, June 24, 2006, Silence (4)By person wrote:

    This is a centiment I do share. I think it bares the emotions of deep hurt from letting someone be trusted deeply. Though it doesnt even have to be someone you love I think. Anywho. *gets fatherly voice* your too young to date. tralala

  • Cattarax On Tuesday, June 13, 2006, Cattarax (216)By person wrote:

    because men suck ... no seriously though because you learn from love and in loving you grow .. you will never make the same mistakes twice with a man each time will be a new pain and a new hurt till you decide witch ones are livable :)

  • A former member wrote: Because you aren't learning. It's like in an exam: you'll make the same mistake again and again until you'll understand WHY you made the mistake

  • A former member wrote: (avoiding the exam wouldn't help you btw because that wouldn't make you learn either)


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