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The Biggest Mistake of my Life is: Losing You
By mywristshurt
05-17-06
I had one chance to make everything right
But that time has come and gone.
You're to far out of reach now,
Oh man I did so much wrong.
I had a perfect opportunity to make everything up to you,
Instead I let you walk away.
What a mistake did I make
I regret it to this day.
A chance in time I could've told you the truth
But I let you believe in so many lies.
It hurts so badly to think
That all I want to do for you now is die.
Why did I have to loose you?
I'm such a fuck up!
This poem won't get you back,
I have nothing more to say.
Except:
I had one chance to make everything right,
Instead I let you walk away.
It hurts so badly to think
I have nothing more to say.
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© 2006 TheWhimperedRose
Published on Wednesday, May 17, 2006.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "The Biggest Mistake of my Life is: Losing You"
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On Monday, January 8, 2007, slightlygothic89
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wrote:
i feel like this everyday. i think she does too, but im not sure nor does it matter. i love this poem because its my thoughts coming from someone else's mouth
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On Monday, June 12, 2006, mywristshurt
(408) wrote:
ill correct my mistake.. look, i like it the way it is.. i mean, its my feelings not a movie sunflower.. if you dont like it, im at least glad that you shared your opinion
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A former member wrote:
well, this write was average, at best..there wasn't enough imagery to be captivating, i suppose. to improve this, perhaps add more visuals for the reader to see and relate to? also, you spelled "losing" wrong in the title.
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A former member wrote:
holy fricking hell...it's like you plucked your words from the deepest pits of my heart and illuminated them with your beauty for all the world to read and consider. This is beautiful...~*Beth*~
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On Wednesday, May 17, 2006, Cattarax
(216) wrote:
AWWWWWWWWW *hugs* I am so sorry ... but everything happens for a reason ... let destiny and fate take there course .. you learn from your mistakes to :)
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On Wednesday, May 17, 2006, Dissolving Poet
(564) wrote:
Awww girl this made me hurt in all directions and it just burned me with the passion. I know how this is, and how it can just rip you up
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