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No Longer a Virgin
By mywristshurt
11-12-05
Your cold fingers on my back,
Bring shivers down my spine.
I would never picture me laying like this,
But I'm putting lust on the line.
Slowly your hands touch my chest,
And move by inches down my stomach.
I'll moan lightly in caress,
For I can't help my emotions.
My heart is beating faster,
Like a volcano ready to errupt.
Hoping this doesn't turn into a disaster,
Take me with all your might.
And as much as I want it in,
It hurts so badly.
But I refuse to give up on it,
I shove it in farther.
My groans protest the pain,
And now I'm screaming out your name.
As it finally comes to a nice, smooth stop,
Because I am...
No longer a virgin.
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© 2006 TheWhimperedRose
Comments on "No Longer a Virgin"
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A former member wrote:
So many different feelings, the feeling of doing something so taboo, so daring. You did a great job explaining. =)
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On Monday, January 8, 2007, slightlygothic89
(9)
wrote:
lots of imagery(if thats how you spell it) I like it
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A former member wrote:
very nice write.
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On Saturday, July 29, 2006, mywristshurt
(408) wrote:
thanks, all of you.. i mean it.. this was just something that i felt, and i felt the need to share that.. not that i want to have sex with everyone and... nevm.. anyways, thanks for the comments
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On Saturday, July 29, 2006, A poet of madness
(115) wrote:
such a complicated thing, described with such simplicity. very well done.
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A former member wrote:
you describe a roller coaster of emotion and intensity that i have yet to experience
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A former member wrote:
one word. beautiful. makes me want to have sex
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A former member wrote:
wow! everything u write i can relly relate to...all i can say is...that was awsome!
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On Monday, May 1, 2006, virginalnympho
(19) wrote:
intense. loved it
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On Sunday, April 30, 2006, Cattarax
(216) wrote:
hmmmm ... lol I wish i could be a virgin again some time ... it might be a nice feeling ... nice work .. but you missed an S in spine :)
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On Friday, April 28, 2006, Hello Dead Kitty
(29) wrote:
whoaaaaa...man, brings back some personal kick-ass memories...thanks for the ride back into time
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On Friday, April 28, 2006, Dissolving Poet
(564) wrote:
This was intense WOW! you blew me away
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