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Silk
By BrokenButterflyWings
Wrap myself
in a clean silk scarf
so perfect it makes me numb
a simple scratch
can kill a rose
wrap me tighter
it mustn't slip
must not feel the cold
knot it tight
and go away
before it all explodes
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© 2006 BrokenButterflyWings
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On Saturday, July 3, 2010, A Life Without You
(146)
wrote:
I must agree with GV, a most beautiful piece
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On Saturday, July 3, 2010, Gray Vision
(425) wrote:
Despite the short structure of this write it speaks volumes, beautiful and the title just adds so much more power to it. Keep writing Broken, your works are truely breathe taking. Thank you for sharing =)
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A former member wrote:
furls around the mind, then almost slips away from you, this write.. perfect title. well done. welcome to darkpoetry.
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A former member wrote:
very beautiful. i love little poems like this. "a simple scratch can kill a rose" compact and lovely, welcome to dp.
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On Saturday, April 22, 2006, Grey Lies
(186) wrote:
sort and deviously sweet.! welcome to DP
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On Monday, April 24, 2006, BrokenButterflyWings
(33) wrote:
thanks =)
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