Ode to a Flame

By BrokenButterflyWings

Fire, fire
Flames grow higher
Burn now brighter
Reaching from your tarnished cage
Share with us your living rage
Warm us with your glowing heart
And leave us with your smoke and dark

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© 2006 BrokenButterflyWings
Published on Friday, April 21, 2006.     Filed under: "Reflective" and "Poetry"
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  • A Life Without You On Saturday, July 3, 2010, A Life Without You (146)By person wrote:

    Ah yes, the flame, my it depart n leave us to the dark... to the night. That we may burn within.... that we may shine our light.... A most Intriguing write my friend

  • Gray Vision On Saturday, July 3, 2010, Gray Vision (424)By person wrote:

    Not a pyromaniac but I will say though, this piece is beautiful and my goodness miss, this is the first piece I've read that has been dated back this far, I feel like I've uncovered an antique. Thank you so much for sharing =)

  • A former member wrote: Thank you for sharing something so close to your heart. In the words I can feel your heartbeats and your pulse and the soul within. Thank you.

  • mywristshurt On Saturday, April 29, 2006, mywristshurt (405)By person wrote:

    lovely.. such emotion and rythm.. i liked it

  • Grey Lies On Saturday, April 22, 2006, Grey Lies (185)By person wrote:

    loving how it flows...truly a rhyme to skumber to.

  • edenscancer On Friday, April 21, 2006, edenscancer (31)By person wrote:

    you know how pretty i think this is :)

  • BrokenButterflyWings On Saturday, April 22, 2006, BrokenButterflyWings (33)By person wrote:

    =) I’m glad I joined if only for this poem. Its so old and has meant so much to me on a personal level for so long, I am surprised to find out that it touches other people…

  • darkdesires On Friday, April 21, 2006, darkdesires (139)By person wrote:

    beautiful. Its nice to see an actual piece here and there. ^_^ no offense to anyone...

  • BrokenButterflyWings On Saturday, April 22, 2006, BrokenButterflyWings (33)By person wrote:

    thank you so much =)

  • A former member wrote: beautiful! you can almost feel the heat, hear the flame crackling! i really like this one.

  • BrokenButterflyWings On Saturday, April 22, 2006, BrokenButterflyWings (33)By person wrote:

    thanks

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