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Lucy
By Crimson Shade
I take my place by the mantle,
Searching for the signs of your passing,
The purity of the flame reveals nothing,
But a slideshow of days passed.
You seemed happy, you moved with purpose once more,
Writing a “new chapter” in your life you said,
But now I see through your deception,
You were leaving me.
And now you’ve gone, “painless” they said,
I still don’t accept it – I’m the crazy one, not you,
I’m sorry my friend, I wasn’t strong enough,
I will live for both of us now - I will remember.
“I hope you find the peace in death that you couldn’t find in life
– Goodbye Lucy, I’ll see you on the other side”
22/8/1985 – 31/01/06
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© 2006 Crimson Shade
Published on Tuesday, January 31, 2006.
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On Sunday, February 19, 2006, TropicalSnowstorm
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wrote:
Very moving piece. Ciao, T/S
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A former member wrote:
A painful write, so beautifully inspiring. An emotionally charged experience. I'm sorry too.
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A former member wrote:
wow..this is amazing..and unapproachable, almost. but i'll leave my two cents. this is a gorgeous tribute. i'm sorry you had to write it, though. *hugs* you are indeed a beautiful soul.
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On Wednesday, February 1, 2006, island warrior
(210) wrote:
Moving piece.
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On Tuesday, January 31, 2006, Doc
(145) wrote:
Im sorry
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On Tuesday, January 31, 2006, TaintedButterfly
(670) wrote:
This has me in tears, and I am so sorry you lost your friend. This is beautiful and such an honorable tribute. I'm sure she thought you were an awesome friend, because you are an awesome person. You're in my thoughts! *hugs seeet one* Julia~
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