Raw Emotions

By GothicBlack

Just as i thought
I had reached
My very bottom
I find myself
Tripping
Falling
Again

Even farther down
Bluring my vision
To the point
Where i dont know
Reality from insanity

And i am in tears
Sitting right here
For no reason
Other than the
Unpleasentries
Of life itself

As time passes
And i have to
Tell myself daily
That i am alive
And that
It is a
Good
Thing

Because it doesnt
Seem all that
Wonderful
To me

And again, as always
There are these tears
That keep on


Falling


From my face
And my eyes
Are so very sore
From all these tears
From all of this


Crying


And i don't understand
Where it is coming from
Raw emotions
Burning inside
I can
F e e l


Everything


And it is all
Way too much
Raw emotion


Inside


For me to handle
For me to control
For me to feel
Its killing me


Slowly


Because of all of these
Damn tears, fears
The raw emotion
Is burning me
A L I V E

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© 2005 GothicBlack
Published on Tuesday, November 15, 2005.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: WOW! BRAVO! u really do make me mentally orgasm thru ur poetry u stimulate my psyche u r da Goth manz dream U R A Queen *P kisses your forehead in slow motion*-PERSEVERANCE-

  • diavolessa On Tuesday, November 15, 2005, diavolessa (208)By person wrote:

    yes, this has a powerful, beautiful flow, which sort of washes through you with sadness and beauty.

  • Kali Ma On Tuesday, November 15, 2005, Kali Ma (43)By person wrote:

    wow, this poem flows so well. i love the style of it, and I can definitely relate to what you say in here. a very beautiful, though sad, poem.

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