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under oath
By cemetarydance
darkness covers every inch of me as I walk...alone
my heart bleeds into the snow as my tears freeze
I'm dying with only one wish...to not be alone
I stumble along looking for redemption...save me
Lilly Adams
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© 2005 cemetarydance
Published on Monday, November 7, 2005.
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A former member wrote:
I believe we share a wish... i felt this one through and through... loneliness really does feel like the end...
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On Tuesday, June 26, 2007, NightDragon
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wrote:
That's Great!
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On Wednesday, February 15, 2006, Alanarchy
(1200) wrote:
*I stumble along looking for redemption* Yes. nice.
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A former member wrote:
for a 2 min work I cant wait to see what you can do if you think for a day
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A former member wrote:
Hell yeah thats the shit dude!
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On Monday, November 7, 2005, manywalks
(750) wrote:
I always enjoy minimalism when it is well crafted, thank you. ! mw
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On Monday, November 7, 2005, cemetarydance
(21) wrote:
I thought this up in two minutes and wrote it down before I forgot.Sorry if it sucks.hehe
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