negative space

By Echo

existing on the edge of negative space
shroud in silk; bound in lace
kissing the twilight; stealing the nite's embrace

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© 2005 Echo
Published on Friday, November 4, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: nice man.

  • Rone4611 On Friday, December 9, 2005, Rone4611 (121)By person wrote:

    now i have the nirvana song "negitive creep" stuck in my head. this was pleasurably simple, and beautiful. im with blueskies

  • manywalks On Monday, November 7, 2005, manywalks (747)By person wrote:

    Simplicity and grace. ~ mw

  • blue On Saturday, November 5, 2005, blue (1409)By person wrote:

    hmm. interesting.. not sure if i get the message, but it did read well.. minimalism is under-rated. keep at it. ~b

  • A former member wrote: nice... I know this is a contradiction, but the only way I can describe it is "vividly vague".

  • A former member wrote: something about the last line made me want more, but it was a good poem...i think shortness can be greatness if done just right.

  • Lady Grinning Soul On Friday, November 4, 2005, Lady Grinning Soul (143)By person wrote:

    way short but it has a nice touch to it.

  • Err0r On Friday, November 4, 2005, Err0r (358)By person wrote:

    Thats so short, but sweet. Sometime the greatest pleasures in life are not even four lines long. :)

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