negative space
By Echo
existing on the edge of negative space
shroud in silk; bound in lace
kissing the twilight; stealing the nite's embrace
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© 2005 Echo
Published on Friday, November 4, 2005.
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"Poetry"
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A former member wrote:
nice man.
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On Friday, December 9, 2005, Rone4611
(121) wrote:
now i have the nirvana song "negitive creep" stuck in my head. this was pleasurably simple, and beautiful. im with blueskies
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On Monday, November 7, 2005, manywalks
(747) wrote:
Simplicity and grace. ~ mw
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On Saturday, November 5, 2005, blue
(1409) wrote:
hmm. interesting.. not sure if i get the message, but it did read well.. minimalism is under-rated. keep at it. ~b
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A former member wrote:
nice... I know this is a contradiction, but the only way I can describe it is "vividly vague".
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A former member wrote:
something about the last line made me want more, but it was a good poem...i think shortness can be greatness if done just right.
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On Friday, November 4, 2005, Lady Grinning Soul
(143) wrote:
way short but it has a nice touch to it.
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On Friday, November 4, 2005, Err0r
(358) wrote:
Thats so short, but sweet. Sometime the greatest pleasures in life are not even four lines long. :)