negative space

existing on the edge of negative space
shroud in silk; bound in lace
kissing the twilight; stealing the nite's embrace

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Published on Friday, November 4, 2005. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "negative space"

A former member wrote: nice man.
On Friday, December 9, 2005, Rone4611 (123) wrote:

now i have the nirvana song "negitive creep" stuck in my head. this was pleasurably simple, and beautiful. im with blueskies
On Monday, November 7, 2005, manywalks (750) wrote:

Simplicity and grace. ~ mw
On Saturday, November 5, 2005, blue (1454) wrote:

hmm. interesting.. not sure if i get the message, but it did read well.. minimalism is under-rated. keep at it. ~b
A former member wrote: nice... I know this is a contradiction, but the only way I can describe it is "vividly vague".
A former member wrote: something about the last line made me want more, but it was a good poem...i think shortness can be greatness if done just right.
On Friday, November 4, 2005, Lady Grinning Soul (145) wrote:

way short but it has a nice touch to it.
On Friday, November 4, 2005, Err0r (365) wrote:

Thats so short, but sweet. Sometime the greatest pleasures in life are not even four lines long. :)