Reverend Blues

By Doc

White passes before the eyes,
Reflections of yellow sun and paint,
Amongst the gathering call,
Of the pain of a nation.

It is the ends to a means,
The forgiver,
But never forgetter,
The destiny of many generations,
Of displaced,
And never willing visitors.

From the essence of this,
Reigns the sorrow,
Of the blue endless streams of emotion,
Screaming and wailing,
Of the man and his own hollow wooden god,
Followed by silence,
Never understood,
Simply felt.

The Reverend plays it to himself,
On the prison church organ,
When no one is watching him,
The captive never sing of cotton.

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Doc
Published on Thursday, October 13, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • ApathysKiss On Thursday, October 20, 2005, ApathysKiss (377)By person wrote:

    ugh i think it's about time i faved you...how old are you? sheesh...the flow the depth the wisdom...i could say a bunch of things but it would just echo sainted and midnight...so off to the fave poets you go, that way i can follow more of your stuff...

  • ApathysKiss On Thursday, October 20, 2005, ApathysKiss (377)By person wrote:

    the flow of this was a faint drumming when i read it slowly...hypnotic....shadows play in the background...a nation on a cross-shaped precipice...obscurely stigmatised.....this probes laterally and hauntingly...and it should for real.

  • A former member wrote: such a quietly pounding message youve written.. .[is it hard to be a prophet??] you make it seems so simple; this remains remarkable and resolute in its boldness... has such a hardened sorrow to it. ..greatness

  • Sin On Friday, October 14, 2005, Sin (1135)By person wrote:

    you are so talented...and wise beyond your years..i cant wait to see how much better you get with time..this was chilling and captivating and leaves me in a weird state, good job sonny ~kristy

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