At odds with privacy

By veingo

I come to life.
The sun is bright.
I slept with just myself last night.
Yes I'm alone.
And thankfuly,
there's no one here to bother me.
My coffee's hot.
I'm running late.
The raceing rats,
flash glares of hate.
I try to get,
from here to there.
But traffic won't go anywhere.
And if I speak,
no one will hear.
And if I scream,
no one will care.
When I arrive.
The mood is down.
Motivation is on the ground.
The schedule's blown.
The work's behind.
The consequences are all mine.
I do my thing.
Don't hesitate.
I work all day without a break.
Then make excuses.
Buy some time.
And head home with no peace of mind.
But traffic's jambed,
All through town.
I don't get home until sundown.
I walk inside.
Turn on the light.
No one is here,
this quiet night.
So if I speak,
no one will hear.
And if I scream,
no one will care.
I eat my fill,
and rest a while.
Think of today, and do not smile.
I'm crawling out
of one more day.
Into my bed, to fade away.
The pillow's hard.
The sheets are cold.
I'm wishing for, another soal.
But I'm alone,
and so at least,
theres no one here to bother me.


And I have found,
I've come to be ,
at odds with my own privacy.

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Veingo
Published on Tuesday, October 11, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: ....been feeling this lately; irony that i should click on it now? always been a loner, never have i felt so lonely......blessings, ron~

  • TaintedButterfly On Thursday, January 26, 2006, TaintedButterfly (653)By person wrote:

    Calling it privacy makes you feel less alone, lol... awesome piece!

  • Err0r On Wednesday, October 12, 2005, Err0r (358)By person wrote:

    Privacy is one thing, but lonliness is another- perhaps just deciding which is which? Either way lovely write.

  • veingo On Wednesday, October 12, 2005, veingo (526)By person wrote:

    Exactly. You deserve,a milkshake.^V^

  • little butterfly On Wednesday, October 12, 2005, little butterfly (36)By person wrote:

    it's a great feeling to be a lone but sometimes you just want company this makes me want to be alone more

  • A former member wrote: this makes me feel bad....so....I guess I'm saying good job.....I guess

  • Doc On Tuesday, October 11, 2005, Doc (143)By person wrote:

    Certainly a understanable situation. I for one have always prefered to wake up with someone next to me. Too many years of a highly aggravating privacy.


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