When she was , my love

By veingo

She was holy once, in my sight.
in my heart.
in my soal.
in my life.

When she cut me, I defended her actions.
cursed, words.
crushed, means.
left, reasons.

When she came back the third, time she was normal.
fourth, equal.
fifth, fallible.
sixth, regretful.

I am over it now.
past it
above it
beyond it

Have you not beguiled me enough my love?

Am I not servile enough my love?

Have you not defiled me enough my love?


I think,

Yes.

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Veingo
Published on Monday, October 10, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Magnificent, i was thrust upward with emotion.-HK

  • Rebel_not_Radical On Saturday, August 19, 2006, Rebel_not_Radical (75)By person wrote:

    ~hits me hard and now i crumble in memories again...Very cool, ill be reading your works man.

  • TaintedButterfly On Tuesday, May 16, 2006, TaintedButterfly (653)By person wrote:

    I could slap myself for not finding this one sooner! The hurt, pain, anger, regret, sadness...& love- it seeps through every line. Freakin awesome! Julia~

  • A former member wrote: your skin seems almost smeared with charcoal and dipped into ashes that painted the wind in this, along with broken melodies held together by the most thin of guy-strings. i adore how i can always find gems just by going to you profile..

  • A former member wrote: and i know you'll never stop surprising me with your milk-smooth quality of writing. thank you for being you, ron. you are a breath of unspoiled air, a drink of purified water, and someone i truly admire. ♥

  • A former member wrote: by the way, i meant gut-strings. i'm having typing issues today :)

  • missanthropic On Saturday, January 28, 2006, missanthropic (26)By person wrote:

    Well spoken and simply exquisite.

  • A former member wrote: "sixth, regretful" No Doubt! I love it; a new twist on 'let me count the ways' I ask myself: forgiving or a sucker, I'm both...you? .... cool write.

  • veingo On Tuesday, January 17, 2006, veingo (526)By person wrote:

    yyyyyyyyyyyyup! Thanks.

  • A former member wrote: You can surprise urself by the number of times you can forgive.. and welcome heartache back into your life with open arms... when you'rs in love....

  • Sin On Tuesday, October 11, 2005, Sin (1135)By person wrote:

    oh this struck me...i think almost everyone has that one person that they want it to work so badly with but cant ever seem to get it right..and finally have to let it go, or try to...~kristy

  • a_deception_unto_myself On Monday, October 10, 2005, a_deception_unto_myself (15)By person wrote:

    *sigh*if it isnt the one thing we all find so easy to relate to...Great write.

  • Err0r On Monday, October 10, 2005, Err0r (358)By person wrote:

    Relationships can be wonderful...and most of the time they're crap. Great write.

  • A former member wrote: vaugely familiar, who am i kidding extremly familiar. Very good read! ~Krynn~

  • A former member wrote: Oh gods...so very very VERY easy to relate to for me...beautiful descriptions...this is wonderful! *Evangel*

  • A former member wrote: now if thats not familiar, i don't know what is


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