When she was , my love
By veingo
She was holy once, in my sight.
in my heart.
in my soal.
in my life.
When she cut me, I defended her actions.
cursed, words.
crushed, means.
left, reasons.
When she came back the third, time she was normal.
fourth, equal.
fifth, fallible.
sixth, regretful.
I am over it now.
past it
above it
beyond it
Have you not beguiled me enough my love?
Am I not servile enough my love?
Have you not defiled me enough my love?
I think,
Yes.
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Veingo
Published on Monday, October 10, 2005.
Filed under:
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A former member wrote:
Magnificent, i was thrust upward with emotion.-HK
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On Saturday, August 19, 2006, Rebel_not_Radical
(75) wrote:
~hits me hard and now i crumble in memories again...Very cool, ill be reading your works man.
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On Tuesday, May 16, 2006, TaintedButterfly
(653) wrote:
I could slap myself for not finding this one sooner! The hurt, pain, anger, regret, sadness...& love- it seeps through every line. Freakin awesome! Julia~
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A former member wrote:
your skin seems almost smeared with charcoal and dipped into ashes that painted the wind in this, along with broken melodies held together by the most thin of guy-strings. i adore how i can always find gems just by going to you profile..
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A former member wrote:
and i know you'll never stop surprising me with your milk-smooth quality of writing. thank you for being you, ron. you are a breath of unspoiled air, a drink of purified water, and someone i truly admire. ♥
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A former member wrote:
by the way, i meant gut-strings. i'm having typing issues today :)
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On Saturday, January 28, 2006, missanthropic
(26) wrote:
Well spoken and simply exquisite.
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A former member wrote:
"sixth, regretful" No Doubt! I love it; a new twist on 'let me count the ways' I ask myself: forgiving or a sucker, I'm both...you? .... cool write.
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On Tuesday, January 17, 2006, veingo
(526) wrote:
yyyyyyyyyyyyup! Thanks.
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A former member wrote:
You can surprise urself by the number of times you can forgive.. and welcome heartache back into your life with open arms... when you'rs in love....
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On Tuesday, October 11, 2005, Sin
(1135) wrote:
oh this struck me...i think almost everyone has that one person that they want it to work so badly with but cant ever seem to get it right..and finally have to let it go, or try to...~kristy
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On Monday, October 10, 2005, a_deception_unto_myself
(15) wrote:
*sigh*if it isnt the one thing we all find so easy to relate to...Great write.
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On Monday, October 10, 2005, Err0r
(358) wrote:
Relationships can be wonderful...and most of the time they're crap. Great write.
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A former member wrote:
vaugely familiar, who am i kidding extremly familiar. Very good read! ~Krynn~
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A former member wrote:
Oh gods...so very very VERY easy to relate to for me...beautiful descriptions...this is wonderful! *Evangel*
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A former member wrote:
now if thats not familiar, i don't know what is