Picture of you and me

By aCiD aNgEL

A pictures says a million words
so when i rip the one of you and me



in half



what does that say to you
about the feelings i have for us?


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Copyright 2005 aCiD aNgEL
Published on Sunday, October 9, 2005.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Short yet powerful. Sometimes less is more, and this is a great example of that. Your message is expressed perfectly and needs nothing more or less. Excellent job!

  • A former member wrote: Love it... Great job my friend, the power is thrilling

  • A former member wrote: I don't think it is humanly possible to get any shorter than this and still prove the point of the poem like you did nice work

  • MidniteBlaze On Tuesday, October 11, 2005, MidniteBlaze (23)By person wrote:

    Oh...my...god...so mean...the deception...I second Six-Out...I LOVE IT!

  • Six-Out On Tuesday, October 11, 2005, Six-Out (1435)By person wrote:

    Fucking brutal, I love it.

  • CrestfallenTears On Monday, October 10, 2005, CrestfallenTears (17)By person wrote:

    Nice. That is a great way of putting it.

  • Err0r On Monday, October 10, 2005, Err0r (365)By person wrote:

    I couldn't have said it better. I absolutely love this poem *bookmarks*

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