Picture of you and me

A pictures says a million words
so when i rip the one of you and me

in half

what does that say to you
about the feelings i have for us?

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Published on Sunday, October 9, 2005. Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"

Comments on "Picture of you and me"

A former member wrote: Short yet powerful. Sometimes less is more, and this is a great example of that. Your message is expressed perfectly and needs nothing more or less. Excellent job!
A former member wrote: Love it... Great job my friend, the power is thrilling
A former member wrote: I don't think it is humanly possible to get any shorter than this and still prove the point of the poem like you did nice work
On Tuesday, October 11, 2005, MidniteBlaze (23) wrote:

Oh...my...god...so mean...the deception...I second Six-Out...I LOVE IT!
On Tuesday, October 11, 2005, Six-Out (1423) wrote:

Fucking brutal, I love it.
On Monday, October 10, 2005, CrestfallenTears (17) wrote:

Nice. That is a great way of putting it.
On Monday, October 10, 2005, Err0r (358) wrote:

I couldn't have said it better. I absolutely love this poem *bookmarks*