A Deadly Sin With You, Well Worth The Sacrifice

By MidniteBlaze

(This is a collaborative poem as well as a sensual write between two sensual dark poets)



Laying in bed last night
you weren’t beside me
but my imagination
put you there

(I felt I needed to be there with you
as if I was beside you
using my imagination
I put myself there…with you…)

Your poetic words caressed me
(I chose my words carefully to set the mood)
like each letter flowed over my body
(as I would to you being in your presence)
your rhythm matched mine
(I tried to set the proper vibes in your head)
as if you were in me, grinding away
(as the tension built I could see it happening between us)

My hand substituted for yours
as you told me your fantasies
about our nude bodies
slowing collapsing after our orgasms

(Who would have thought
that words could go so far
and I would get such emotion from you
such deep desires I now have for you)

Soon we became comfortable
(I had to make you feel secure)
sharing our innermost desires
(fantasies becoming temporary realities)
making me moan at the thought
of you your hand instead of mine
(all in due time my dear
all in due time…)

Wishing you were there
watching my touch
turning you on as my body arcs
with pleasure pulsating throughout my entire being

(If only I could be there
the night into day would be unforgettable
your body in my own hands
to be the source of your pleasure while shivering)

It’s your turn now
how I long to please you
to hear you moan in my ear
asking for more

(I’m flattered dear
and I accept with joy
had to show some feeling to get you going
to keep you asking and begging for more)

What do you want from me
how can I touch you
in a way that would make your body shiver
and long to be next to mine

(Anything you would do
at a sensual time like this
I would be satisfied and content with
I think not about you failing to please me)

Imagine taking my black silk sheets
and slowly pulling them away from me
staring at the body you long to be in
it’s time for you to take over
time to show me how much you desire me
how you've craved this moment...

(I can imagine how much my words have mesmerized you
and put you into this state
this state of passion and desire
as the anticipation kills us both
as we both long each other
we know damn well what we both want…)



We both well knew that even if this would kill us
the passion would burn
a sin well worth the sacrifice
to have this extra special night with you





I…want…you…now…
(I lust for you my mistress, bring it on…)

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© 2005 MidniteBlaze
Published on Monday, October 24, 2005.     Filed under: "Erotica" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Sexy, lustful, and amazing write

  • addicted_angel On Monday, October 24, 2005, addicted_angel (21)By person wrote:

    beautiful and tastefully hot what more could you ask for-addicted

  • aCiD aNgEL On Monday, October 24, 2005, aCiD aNgEL (32)By person wrote:

    hot damn! ;)

  • Philla On Monday, October 24, 2005, Philla (95)By person wrote:

    *closes eyes* I feel like I'm reaing a mix between the titanic and titty ttiy band bang. It's a compliment! Really! Sensual and romantic. Lordy lord lordy. I'm going to hell just for reading this. lol. Beautiful write. -*Philla*-

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