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Just be here
By veingo
Please don't leave.
Don't go searching for gifts
to conjure thanks,
and short-lived smiles.
Give me nothing.
Just be here.
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Veingo
Published on Friday, October 7, 2005.
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A former member wrote:
I agree with Sin this goes straight to the message and is sometimes what needs to be heard
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A former member wrote:
made me think...that's all i ask for..but i can't have it cuz the one i want to be here is 3 staets away...anl my folks moved me away from her..thanks for sharing
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A former member wrote:
20 words never rang so true......
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On Tuesday, November 25, 2008, Believer
(48)
wrote:
that's all i ever wanted. but it seems like it wont' happen anytime soon...i like the humility in this that is rarely found.
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On Tuesday, July 25, 2006, Sin
(1168) wrote:
i love minimalism when it is done intelligently...no extra words to clutter the message, this was beautiful ~kristy
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On Saturday, November 26, 2005, Eric
(78) wrote:
very simple, but very well written. I really like this. perfect. ^_^
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On Sunday, November 6, 2005, Err0r
(365) wrote:
I'm going to show this to my girlfriend...finally someone can put into words what I've felt all along. Thank you for this write. :)
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A former member wrote:
few words = all that needs to be said
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A former member wrote:
I don't want the stars or the moon...I just want you to stay under them with me. Lovely write. *Evangel*
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On Friday, October 7, 2005, mysticventures
(538) wrote:
I love short writes - and this one was perfect :)
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