Just be here

Please don't leave.

Don't go searching for gifts

to conjure thanks,

and short-lived smiles.

Give me nothing.

Just be here.

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Veingo

Published on Friday, October 7, 2005. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "Just be here"

A former member wrote: I agree with Sin this goes straight to the message and is sometimes what needs to be heard
A former member wrote: made me think...that's all i ask for..but i can't have it cuz the one i want to be here is 3 staets away...anl my folks moved me away from her..thanks for sharing
A former member wrote: 20 words never rang so true......
On Tuesday, November 25, 2008, Believer (48) wrote:

that's all i ever wanted. but it seems like it wont' happen anytime soon...i like the humility in this that is rarely found.
On Tuesday, July 25, 2006, Sin (1135) wrote:

i love minimalism when it is done intelligently...no extra words to clutter the message, this was beautiful ~kristy
On Saturday, November 26, 2005, Eric (77) wrote:

very simple, but very well written. I really like this. perfect. ^_^
On Sunday, November 6, 2005, Err0r (358) wrote:

I'm going to show this to my girlfriend...finally someone can put into words what I've felt all along. Thank you for this write. :)
A former member wrote: few words = all that needs to be said
A former member wrote: I don't want the stars or the moon...I just want you to stay under them with me. Lovely write. *Evangel*
On Friday, October 7, 2005, mysticventures (527) wrote:

I love short writes - and this one was perfect :)