And Here I Stand

By Thorn

Here I stand
As the world crumbles
And crashes down around me
I will not be moved.

A friend's funeral
Suicide by hanging
And here I still stand
And I will not be moved.

A love falters
Young hearts shattering like glass
And yet here I stand
And I will not be moved.

A marriage tears apart
A child breaks down in tears
But here I still stand
And I will not be moved.

A hundred broken lives
A thousand shattered dreams
I stand against it all
And I will not be moved.

The world crumbles
Collapsing all around me
But I will never allow
Myself to crumble with it.



Here I Stand


And I will NOT be moved.

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(c) 2005 by Thorn
Published on Monday, October 3, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: this shows great strength. hopefully things are better now.

  • Forgotten Angel On Saturday, November 26, 2005, Forgotten Angel (309)By person wrote:

    wow..i dont know what to say...this is just amazing...and..idk..its just amazing...again.. :) -Kel

  • A former member wrote: Bravo..

  • Army Barbie On Sunday, October 23, 2005, Army Barbie (316)By person wrote:

    Y'know, I just lost a friend...and I have to say I've been uprooted and moved and damnit I've been buried as well. This...makes me want to find where and who I was, keep my ass rooted there, and let the world leave me be. I love it.

  • A Burning God On Tuesday, October 18, 2005, A Burning God (46)By person wrote:

    Very nice, thorn. Now I can understand you better. Firebirnger

  • lostshadow On Tuesday, October 4, 2005, lostshadow (8)By person wrote:

    WOW thorn this is an amazing poem I can relate to it in the fact that i lost a good firend and military brother not too long ago and that pain is always here but I move on

  • Nail Bunny On Tuesday, October 4, 2005, Nail Bunny (161)By person wrote:

    That is amazing. You are standing firm, an inspiration to the rest of us. the roughness just makes it so much better.

  • A former member wrote: hey jet this was awsome....i really like it....good way to stand your ground.....again good job....

  • AHHH On Monday, October 3, 2005, AHHH (184)By person wrote:

    i hate it when people dont comment on good works, im sure this was only over looked, and was scooted off to the big list too soon. i enjoyed it. and im here again to say so.

  • AHHH On Monday, October 3, 2005, AHHH (184)By person wrote:

    i got a big bitch slap of insensitivity, and that my friend, i like. awesome write. BUT I WILL NOT BE MOVED BY IT, NO! kidding, back to seriousness , nice job.

  • Thorn On Monday, October 3, 2005, Thorn (282)By person wrote:

    Sorry if this is rough around the edges. I just wrote it as the words came out.

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