You Tore My Heart To Peices When You Said You Didn't Love Me

By l mo










y o u t o r e m y h e a r t
t o p e i c e s w h e n y o u s a i d
y o u d i d n t l o v e m e y o u t o r e m y
h e a r t t o p e i c e s w h e n y o u s a i d y o u
d i d n t l o v e m e y o u t o r e m y h e a r t t o p e i c
e s w h e n y o u s a i d y o u d i d n t l o v e m e y o u t o r e m
y h e a r t t o p e i c e s w h e n y o u s a i d y o u d i d n t l o
v e m e y o u t o r e m y h e a r t t o p e i c e s w h e n y o
u s a i d y o u d i d n t l o v e m e y o u t o r e m y
h e a r t t o p e i c e s w h e n y o u s a i d y
u o d i d n t l o v e m e y o u t o r e m y
h e a r t t o p e i c e s w h e n y
o u s a i d y o u d i d n t
l o v e m e y o u t
o r e m y h e
a r t









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Copyright 2005 night_sky
Published on Friday, August 19, 2005.     Filed under: "Rage" and "Poetry"
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Comments on "You Tore My Heart To Peices When You Said You Didn't Love Me"

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  • The Crimson Queen On Thursday, October 27, 2005, The Crimson Queen (917)By person wrote:

    Very emotional, the repetitive words just burn into my eyes.

  • glasshouse On Saturday, August 20, 2005, glasshouse (530)By person wrote:

    hmmm... if you look at it long enough... it looks like one of those magic eye things. i can see all sorts of things in there. but seriously... i can see where tim is coming from. i like the line and the format. -Glass

  • l mo On Saturday, August 20, 2005, l mo (55)By person wrote:

    yeah...it was supposed to be a heart, but it wouldn't work....


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