Clouded Mind
By steuss
I'll walk alone below it all,
crawl though the clouds of my mind,
swoop under the stars and moon,
like globs of honey falling,
it'll be me.
Monolithic castles and avenues for airships
boulders and crennelations built from cloudy
stones welcome me in their open doorways.
They engulf me in the fluff.
And like cotton candy my thoughts will melt
when touched, stick to my fingers but be
unrecognizable. eventually to drip elongated
drops of oozing thought between my fingers to my toes.
I'm alone after all, awake and aware,
listening and lamenting the loss of my way.
I've lost my mind in these clouds, they cluster
around my thinking and after falling to the floor they
are trampled by my feet, sticking to their residue.
I'm walking alone below it all,
looking up at these giant feet stuck to my surface,
and i wonder, Where am I? Could i be thinking
dreaming or being? as only a Thought, i can be,
am I just that, fallen to the floor in the tar of some
other person's brain, slipped between fingers and fallen?
I. am. Me?
Comments on "Clouded Mind"
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On Monday, December 24, 2007, italianbella
(183) wrote:
You created the most enchanting and beautiful images in this write beautifully woven words made for a great read:)
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A former member wrote:
Absoutly amazing surreal imagery.
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On Thursday, November 10, 2005, AniDayz
(812) wrote:
ohhhh...still, i taste this on my tongue,as before, though, today....within my shadow of grey sun fallen day...this just...just melts in my mouth. ... *revert[s] back to this again.+again+again...*
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On Friday, August 26, 2005, AniDayz
(812) wrote:
oh wow...the incredibility of this piece is abounding....the deep introspective awareness...and the use of metaphors---is simply astounding. this speaks in rhythms and volumes....both of which i hear deeply. thankyou for this.
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On Saturday, August 20, 2005, blue
(1409) wrote:
Absolutely wonderful! And where do we really make our claims to life? Self dissection never tasted so good. *much applause* ~b
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On Friday, August 19, 2005, Sin
(1135) wrote:
ive missed your writings...they always hold such intelligence and facination...im glad youre posting again ~kristy