Our last kiss

(not yet finished, especially the last 2 couplets need to be redone...and it should have a better end)

My hatred fades just as you go
New found Love sets my mind to overflow
This hurt that tore me deep inside
As you passed, it just died

You tried and tasted our last kiss
Your cry enjoyed me more than this
For all the venom that you brew
I gave it all right back to you

A crumbling man there on the floor
Who never learned to open doors
Pain and terror made him weep
A sound so nice, I fell asleep

Goodbye you cheater and thank you
Cause now I know what Love can do
A heart that's broken like a jar
Needs a broken dork just like you are