Once upon a time

By rainbowgoth

He holds her close
Kisses her softly
Sweetly
So sweet it's sickening
He lets her go
She steps inside
Goes to her room
She just sits in a corner and cries
She says she loves him
And once upon a time she did
But she no longer knows what she feels
And if she does it's anything but love
She says she cares about him
And once upon a time she did
But she no longer knows
Once upon a time
They were close

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Copyright 2005 rainbowgoth
Published on Monday, May 30, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: this is a sad haertbreaking piece i love keep writing

  • wandering druid On Monday, May 30, 2005, wandering druid (78)By person wrote:

    Nice write...well, not so nice since it was written in pain, but you get my drift.

  • Dei On Monday, May 30, 2005, Dei (663)By person wrote:

    Oh god.. i hear ya. DP-mail me sometime. We'll talk. or add me if you have messenger. My screen names are on my profile

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