A poet's power

By wandering druid

The sands of time
are shifting about
The desert of life
Which is transformed
To a lush savannah
By the tears of a poet
On a dark lonely night

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Copyright 2005 onelastbreath
Published on Wednesday, May 25, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: *gasps* what a poingient and vivid write! beautiful :D

  • AngelicDemonMelisandre On Monday, May 30, 2005, AngelicDemonMelisandre (26)By person wrote:

    It's a "simple-like" poem that has a lot of depth to it, you've made the surroundings so clear in the minds eye. It's a very good piece. I love it.

  • Serenity On Sunday, May 29, 2005, Serenity (469)By person wrote:

    Such beautiful vision and a message so clear. Beautiful.

  • DarkDruidess On Wednesday, May 25, 2005, DarkDruidess (326)By person wrote:

    I loved the vision this gave me...beautiful

  • elisa On Wednesday, May 25, 2005, elisa (1616)By person wrote:

    the acoustic cry of the sahara dunes......the oasis is not far behind~elisa

  • peril_notion On Wednesday, May 25, 2005, peril_notion (88)By person wrote:

    message well received. good job ~Heather

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