My devotion

By rainbowgoth

Rape me
Fuck me
Have me
Hold me
Keep me
Tease me
Just don't beat me
You can have my body
I'll even give u my soul
Just don't leave me
You are what makes me whole

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Copyright 2005 rainbowgoth
Published on Saturday, May 14, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: lots of emotion lots of love i like it keep writing

  • Mylissa On Wednesday, November 15, 2006, Mylissa (845)By person wrote:

    This has a lot of emotion in it. Very well done.

  • Mari On Sunday, May 28, 2006, Mari (425)By person wrote:

    .suck. nah im jk i like it. its raw. rawr grr baby grr.

  • blue On Sunday, May 15, 2005, blue (1454)By person wrote:

    straight and to the point! I likes it! ~b

  • Kinkypoptart On Sunday, May 15, 2005, Kinkypoptart (555)By person wrote:

    I love it. Great write ~*~TarT~*~

  • Serenity On Saturday, May 14, 2005, Serenity (469)By person wrote:

    Oh I like this! XD Very nice

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