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Release Me (reformatted)
By mysticventures
Release me
O' thine passion
Unbound your arms
From around my soul
For I have been
Your slave
Too long
And grow weary
Of wearing your chains
Release me
O' thine passion
And let me breath
Again,
Anew
A life without
Restraints or holds
A freedom
I am
Overdue
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Copyright 2005 mysticventures
Published on Tuesday, January 18, 2005.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Release Me (reformatted)"
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A former member wrote:
Long overdue...from birth to death. ~Diviana
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On Thursday, February 17, 2005, lordshadow
(153)
wrote:
Refreshing... unique... and wonderful
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A former member wrote:
Seren yet passionate. I could live out eternity by your words.
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On Wednesday, January 19, 2005, sIo
(898) wrote:
very nice. sweet flow with a yearning passiong. awesome
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On Tuesday, January 18, 2005, NikesRain
(1240) wrote:
flows nicely like this and visually it looks like it reads, easy and smooth. wb ;)
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On Tuesday, January 18, 2005, Sin
(1135) wrote:
wow...damn you never cease to amaze me, excellent as always ~kristy
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