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TimeWarpedMind
By mysticventures
TIME wreaks havoc
upon the WARPED images
in my MIND
DOOMED to forever wonder
the WARPED and never-ending
corridors of TIME
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Copyright 2005 mysticventures
Published on Monday, January 17, 2005.
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A former member wrote:
Very beautiful and great execution though I question the capitalization.
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A former member wrote:
I really enjoy how you described the transformation of memories over time!
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On Saturday, December 5, 2009, mysticventures
(527)
wrote:
damn dude thanks - but what is Poem of the Day?
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On Saturday, December 5, 2009, SilentStalker
(1047) wrote:
...haha; one poem gets featured every day, and this one came up for the day marked...click on the icon to see the entire listing so far...
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A former member wrote:
Wow, well done!
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A former member wrote:
its not linear for sure... Time is the circle and we're all just running along it, good write in its direct approach
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On Thursday, February 17, 2005, lordshadow
(153) wrote:
Short and succinct... incredibly profound.
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On Monday, January 31, 2005, DarkWolf
(415) wrote:
This was killer.. I love it though I cannot say for certain why.. wandering the corridors of time.. that hits me.. awesome write sir. -Michael
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On Tuesday, January 25, 2005, Zhee
(529) wrote:
you said it perfectly! it is indeed the abyss that never ends....
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On Monday, January 17, 2005, elisa
(1595) wrote:
...but would you really want this ride to ever end..? me neither:) beautifully said Mr. Mystic:)
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