Things I Wish I Would Have Said (Instead I Said...)

By lordshadow

Go away
Disappear
Don't look in my direction
Don't smile at me
Don't cry because of me
Don't call me
Don't speak to me
Don't think of me
Don't dream of me
Don't long for me
Don't lose sleep over me
Don't tell me jokes
Don't tell me about your day
Don't tell me your aspirations
Don't make your little secrets, our little secrets
Don't make your little problems, our little problems...

...and please don't remember me...

...and please don't allow your tears to run the letters on the note you wrote to me, sharing with me all of your dreams, aspirations, and jokes because after all, I should have told you not to...

...but instead I said, "I love you."

*I'm not really sure what this is, I just felt compelled to write it. Don't know if I like it yet or not.

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Published on Thursday, January 6, 2005. Filed under: "Rant"

Comments on "Things I Wish I Would Have Said (Instead I Said...)"

A former member wrote: I really liked this.The second time I read it, i skipped over every "don't" to get a different perspective.sounds really good either way!
On Sunday, December 18, 2005, AHHH (187) wrote:

ha-i said that-and really meant this- i think i'll just recite this next time i bump into the person. memorize it by heart and even include the copyright 2005 lordshadow part. but anyway this was great.absolutely.
A former member wrote: Well that is the sad story of my relationships in a nut shell, care to much to hurt them your poem show alot of meaning i like it alot ~Heretic
A former member wrote: I liked it, as I do all your work. A lot can relate, I'm sure.
On Tuesday, January 18, 2005, AniDayz (820) wrote:

well...i LIKE it very much. the title was particularly attractive to me, i think ,many can relate to the title...and the work flows very well...kind of in your face, but subtly...nicely done
On Friday, January 7, 2005, spaniellie (76) wrote:

i really feel you on this one. great write
A former member wrote: ouch
A former member wrote: sin said it. if our silent disagreements were given voice, each individual life would be in a much different place than it is now. I mentally highlighted quite a few of these, by the way. thanks for sharing.
A former member wrote: interesting...some of those things i feel about love not all of them though, i do like it thought
On Thursday, January 6, 2005, BleedSilver (298) wrote:

I like this too.
On Thursday, January 6, 2005, VenomPlease (134) wrote:

Oh, I love this. Very well said and I can definately relate to having felt this way.
On Thursday, January 6, 2005, Sin (1168) wrote:

we say so many things, but sometimes it is what we dont say that matters most. excellent write ~kristy
On Thursday, January 6, 2005, blue (1454) wrote:

I liked it, and if nothing else; it's a great break-up letter. ;) ~b